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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I'm sure you will.
Remember that your muse communicates with your brain and the combination is often overworked.
A lovely free verse expression of "writer's block."
Venture out in nature and live life and soon your ideas will flow freely.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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I'm sure you will.
Remember that your muse communicates with your brain and the combination is often overworked.
A lovely free verse expression of "writer's block."
Venture out in nature and live life and soon your ideas will flow freely.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Shirley. That works for me.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I do not believe you have a muted pen my friend You have a verbal painting in that mind of yours all the time ..So write away and yu will see how those words will flow free
TK
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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I do not believe you have a muted pen my friend You have a verbal painting in that mind of yours all the time ..So write away and yu will see how those words will flow free
TK
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you very much Tarnished One, that's a real complement coming for you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
The Fanstory Queen of Romantic Poetry, Gungalo, does inspire us so, does she not? That's quite evident here, in your brilliant poem in it's own right.
Nice to see others on FS are inspiring you so, Mr. 'T'. As I am inspired by the legendary Stephen King, you, (yes, YOU, my friend), and so many of the talented authors of poetry and prose between these hallowed pages...
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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The Fanstory Queen of Romantic Poetry, Gungalo, does inspire us so, does she not? That's quite evident here, in your brilliant poem in it's own right.
Nice to see others on FS are inspiring you so, Mr. 'T'. As I am inspired by the legendary Stephen King, you, (yes, YOU, my friend), and so many of the talented authors of poetry and prose between these hallowed pages...
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much Dean. She certainly does. And so do YOU too, my friend.
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Well, thanks Tom, I really appreciate that!
:D
Comment from ravenblack
Will? You do write it all. Don't hesitate to unload the caverns of your mind. Let the quill fly. And when it can't, you know what that means...nature walk!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Will? You do write it all. Don't hesitate to unload the caverns of your mind. Let the quill fly. And when it can't, you know what that means...nature walk!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you ravenblack. Yes I do.
Comment from Gungalo
Awesome free verse and a telling of your desire to write, Tom. I particularly like this part:
For then,
With powerful perception
My pen will race upon the page.
Unfettered thought shall run with joy,
And I will write
It all.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Awesome free verse and a telling of your desire to write, Tom. I particularly like this part:
For then,
With powerful perception
My pen will race upon the page.
Unfettered thought shall run with joy,
And I will write
It all.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you Gungalo.
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Smile
Comment from tfawcus
Funny the tricks the mind plays - mine leapt straight from your 'caverns of the mind' to the Dusty Springfield song 'Windmills of your mind' - no rhyme or reason really. There sometimes seems to be a chasm between that Aladdin's Cave we call a mind and the 'the edges of the quill' So many of the precious jewels fall into it and are forever lost. There is a certain appropriateness in your use of archaic and poetic language in the context of seeking out your muse. Great truth in the inspiration that comes from nature's beauty and a touch of love! Nothing to beat it!
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Funny the tricks the mind plays - mine leapt straight from your 'caverns of the mind' to the Dusty Springfield song 'Windmills of your mind' - no rhyme or reason really. There sometimes seems to be a chasm between that Aladdin's Cave we call a mind and the 'the edges of the quill' So many of the precious jewels fall into it and are forever lost. There is a certain appropriateness in your use of archaic and poetic language in the context of seeking out your muse. Great truth in the inspiration that comes from nature's beauty and a touch of love! Nothing to beat it!
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you tfawcus, your words are so very true and uplifting.
Comment from Capricorn30
Excellent!
My muse has completely escaped me--your writing echoes my sentiments exactly!
Good alliteration incorporated throughout--"powerful perception";
A well-crafted poetry which will perhaps prompt my thoughts.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Excellent!
My muse has completely escaped me--your writing echoes my sentiments exactly!
Good alliteration incorporated throughout--"powerful perception";
A well-crafted poetry which will perhaps prompt my thoughts.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you Margaret. Oh, I hope so.