The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "We all need to step aside some times"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
33 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Sankey,
I read this with much interest and found it to be entertaining and well-written, so you are an on-air entertainer as well as a good writer. *smile* Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Sankey,
I read this with much interest and found it to be entertaining and well-written, so you are an on-air entertainer as well as a good writer. *smile* Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi Robyn...it was a long held wish of mine...later I also did some reading for a station reading papers for the Blind not sure if I mentioned it in this chapter. Thanks for coming along.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting write you have done. You have had a lot of interesting jobs and many little kittens (cats). You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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This is a very interesting write you have done. You have had a lot of interesting jobs and many little kittens (cats). You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Thanks Sis, Bob (mastery) has made some suggestions I might look into again.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Nice writing, my friend,
Nice flow to the story.
I like the inclusion of facts about your pets. Sorry you lost the cats, and hope they ended up in other homes as people may have thought it was okay to take a cat in their home that they saw walking around.
I would love to hear more about your wife you mentioned. Maybe that's going to be in another story.
Well done.
Rhonda
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Nice writing, my friend,
Nice flow to the story.
I like the inclusion of facts about your pets. Sorry you lost the cats, and hope they ended up in other homes as people may have thought it was okay to take a cat in their home that they saw walking around.
I would love to hear more about your wife you mentioned. Maybe that's going to be in another story.
Well done.
Rhonda
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi sis yes wifey is coming getting closer now. Bob (mastery) has made some important suggestions I might look into as well. Lord Bless.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
The tile' We All Need to Step Aside Sometimes', grabs the readers attention. It speaks VOLUME! This is a well-written story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with your future writing!
~Nicole~
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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The tile' We All Need to Step Aside Sometimes', grabs the readers attention. It speaks VOLUME! This is a well-written story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with your future writing!
~Nicole~
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Thanks new friend Nikki-Nicole. have had some good suggestions I need to think about from an old friend. Stick around...and thanks again.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Geoff,
Very interesting. I believe when a person loses his/her way, in some ways it is a time of growth, even spiritually, though it my not be apparent at the time.
I think the Lord throws adversity our way, then sits back and sees whether we try to deal with it, learn from it, and carry on. OR, do we sit down and give up because it's just too hard?
My folks always said, 'The good Lord helps them that helps himself' I believe that. You learned what you needed to, and then you came back. Nicely done, my friend.
~~ Who/What is this? >>> N.F.*<<<
~~ Spacing issue ~~
all got settled, she also
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Hi, Geoff,
Very interesting. I believe when a person loses his/her way, in some ways it is a time of growth, even spiritually, though it my not be apparent at the time.
I think the Lord throws adversity our way, then sits back and sees whether we try to deal with it, learn from it, and carry on. OR, do we sit down and give up because it's just too hard?
My folks always said, 'The good Lord helps them that helps himself' I believe that. You learned what you needed to, and then you came back. Nicely done, my friend.
~~ Who/What is this? >>> N.F.*<<<
~~ Spacing issue ~~
all got settled, she also
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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NF was the initials of the gent who tried to match me up with Filipina last name Farr but felt like I should not -p0ut his name in there will tidy that up. I notice you are doing your own "Copyrights" on your work Tom told me a while back the HTML for © can you help? I am using the Keyboard code tips O got off Face book a while ago but I want the HTML command for it if you know will ask Tom if not forget if I asked if you are on Face Book
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I thi k I fixed the spags are you saying no space after a comma? I think I get mixed up with that. Tried to tidy the end of a line up where a big space and a short conjuctuion on next line but it would not let me fix. have a look.
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Sometimes, for whatever reason, the FS software is glitchy. I know, it's hard to believe but it's true. (*<*)
1) Are you using Advance Editor when you set up your work?
2) Yes---you want a space (after) a comma.
Example below of (incorrect) and (correct)
Incorrect:
?You old betting man,there you go again wagering our home way.?
Correct::: ?You old betting man, there you go again wagering our home way.?
Sometimes when you can't edit inside FS, just delete it and copy/paste again using the Advanced Editor.
Cheers...
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yeah well if a space after a comma I wondered why you queried what I wrote before. It is so funny the spags we get accused of seeing I am sure we are different on either sides of the world ha. Not mad or anything just discussin' hehe. I went and deleted the space after the comma in the error you commented on originally.
I think I have solved the problem with the A thing FS throws up. I now copy the old and paste it in Note pad then clean it up and copy and re paste it in the BASIC editor on FS.
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Yes I am mostly using Advanced Editor
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I don't know anything about Tom's HTML for ©. Depending on your version of software you use. Here is how I do it in Windows 8.1
- Place curser where you want to put copyright symbol
- Go to toolbar
- Click on Insert
- Click on Symbol
- Scroll until you find the copyright © symbol.
- Click on symbol
~~ This is my Facebook address ~~
http://www.facebook.com/jax.franklin.3
Look me up and friend me.
Eezy-peezy! (*:*)
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Good... If things go all wonky I just delete troubled section and reload it, AND it usally fixes it.
Comment from scd41
The narration of your days in Tax Office and volunteering to read for the blind in Radio programmes is absorbing. You have acquired varied experience and the most unexpected was politics. It is interesting to know how Aussies tied knots with Phillipino women just to fool the immigration rules. Hope to have more such surprises in your other chapters of the biographical writings.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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The narration of your days in Tax Office and volunteering to read for the blind in Radio programmes is absorbing. You have acquired varied experience and the most unexpected was politics. It is interesting to know how Aussies tied knots with Phillipino women just to fool the immigration rules. Hope to have more such surprises in your other chapters of the biographical writings.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Hi Friend thanks for coming by. I have pretty well finished this book now apart from the odd additions. Major editing and reviewing coming real soon and working on photos for the published work I cannot add I here thanks again hope you will have a look at the other chapters.
Comment from royowen
I enjoyed this excerpt from your biographical life account, I sympathise with you loss of both your cats, and wonder, along with you, about your speculation of them being used as a 'live lure' for greyhound training. An interesting episode bro, in life's adventures in church, employment and pet ownership! Well compiled and designed biography brother, well done, have a happy, healthy, prosperous (in all ways) new year to you and yours Geoff, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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I enjoyed this excerpt from your biographical life account, I sympathise with you loss of both your cats, and wonder, along with you, about your speculation of them being used as a 'live lure' for greyhound training. An interesting episode bro, in life's adventures in church, employment and pet ownership! Well compiled and designed biography brother, well done, have a happy, healthy, prosperous (in all ways) new year to you and yours Geoff, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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AMEn Bro thanks for coming by. I forget if you are on FACE BOOK I think you might have said you are only on for family or something. Appreciate the great review was talking to someone about illegal immigrants on Face book yesterday and it reminded me of the gu iin Tax who was trying to get me to marry a phillipino woman so she could get into the country. I am sure there are honourable ones though as I know an Aussie Bro in the Lord married an Indonesian Sis in the Lord and had all kinds of trouble getting her into the country .
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My daughter is married to an Indonesian boy, and they didn't have too much trouble, but then then they've been married 6 yrs now! Well done, bro, Roy.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, sankey, I enjoyed reading this one and I like how you were upfront with the way you lost your way for a while but it lead to a different way for you to offer your work to the world.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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this is very well written, sankey, I enjoyed reading this one and I like how you were upfront with the way you lost your way for a while but it lead to a different way for you to offer your work to the world.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Yeah well it wasn't "loss of salvation" I don't believe we can lose that I believe if we do we were not saved in the first place. It was all shock and stuff after the car fire I think. Not forgetting the hormone problems still untreated at the time.
Thanks for coming by.
Comment from robina1978
Even though I did not read the previous chapters, I can follow this one very well. It is about your life when you were still living with your Mum, and you got a female kitten, and you also went to another job.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Even though I did not read the previous chapters, I can follow this one very well. It is about your life when you were still living with your Mum, and you got a female kitten, and you also went to another job.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Thanks friend appreciate you coming by.
Comment from seaglass
This is well written and no errors that I saw. This sounds like a great experience to remember back on. It also sounds like a great program for the blind. I can't remember hearing of anything here, like this.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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This is well written and no errors that I saw. This sounds like a great experience to remember back on. It also sounds like a great program for the blind. I can't remember hearing of anything here, like this.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Hi friend thanks for dropping by again. I would have liked to continue doing it but we live too far away now. I did an upgrade to the chapter 21 there is a promo on it. Funny how we keep finding errors every time we go back in huh!