And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Harvest"A collection of Spirtual poems
75 total reviews
Comment from 9999pool
Show others the light of God, take them home to a place worthy of the highest existence.
Time to harvest for those still searching for the best grains to consume, their search never over if they only use their mortal senses to look at the world.
In heaven, there are many rooms where time and space is meaningless maybe invisible to the naked eye.
The harvest and the journey home is a long one. Be prepared for final battles with the devils - they are waiting at the Pearly Gates last stops.
Good write and well expressed.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Show others the light of God, take them home to a place worthy of the highest existence.
Time to harvest for those still searching for the best grains to consume, their search never over if they only use their mortal senses to look at the world.
In heaven, there are many rooms where time and space is meaningless maybe invisible to the naked eye.
The harvest and the journey home is a long one. Be prepared for final battles with the devils - they are waiting at the Pearly Gates last stops.
Good write and well expressed.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks Richie, My best to you always, Carolyn
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Hi Carolyn,
Thanks for sharing this story of harvest. I just wish we can harvest and not have to sow like in that forgotten garden.
If only time will obey my command, we can all happily harvest and leave the sowing to the heaven's angels, smiles.
Cheerio, best always to you too, hugs, Ritchie.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Is the Harvest just for us, to enjoy and consume
Not so my friends, in Heaven's house, we are told are many rooms
In that City of Gold, with Pearly Gates, there's 'naught of time nor space
The Lord of Harvest freely bestows, the gift, of matchless Grace
I really enjoyed reading this poem. God has His hand in all we do. We don't say thank you, enough.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Is the Harvest just for us, to enjoy and consume
Not so my friends, in Heaven's house, we are told are many rooms
In that City of Gold, with Pearly Gates, there's 'naught of time nor space
The Lord of Harvest freely bestows, the gift, of matchless Grace
I really enjoyed reading this poem. God has His hand in all we do. We don't say thank you, enough.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Well, Barbara, I am overwhelmed at your wonderful comments and the generous stars. Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed
'Harvest'. Carolyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
YES THIS IS VERY WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND AND READS SO WELL SUCH A MEANINGFUL POEM THAT I ENJOYED BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED WELL DONE REGARDS JILL
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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YES THIS IS VERY WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND AND READS SO WELL SUCH A MEANINGFUL POEM THAT I ENJOYED BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED WELL DONE REGARDS JILL
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks Jill, is Erick doing well? I haven't seen him in a while. And how are your eyes doing? I see it is better for you in capital letters. :-) Carolyn
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ERICK IS DOING FINE HE IS NOW ON HIS THIRD BOOK OF POEMS WHICH HE SOON HOPES WILL GOT TO PRING AND MEA I AM JUST DOING AS BEST AS I CAN FOR MY EYES I CANT DO NO MORE SO HAVE TO PUT IT IN GODS HANDS I HOPE YOU ARE WELL ... JILL
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ERICK IS DOING FINE HE IS NOW ON HIS THIRD BOOK OF POEMS WHICH HE SOON HOPES WILL GOT TO PRING AND MEA I AM JUST DOING AS BEST AS I CAN FOR MY EYES I CANT DO NO MORE SO HAVE TO PUT IT IN GODS HANDS I HOPE YOU ARE WELL ... JILL
Comment from mickbey
A very lovely job, sounds sincere and heartfelt, the harvest theme is nice and the photo fits it well, always good to see someone relate their spiritual joy, and you did a good job of doing that, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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A very lovely job, sounds sincere and heartfelt, the harvest theme is nice and the photo fits it well, always good to see someone relate their spiritual joy, and you did a good job of doing that, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the great comments, rating, and good luck. You covered it all, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Carolyn
This poetry is bright and sunny. The rhymes are not
forced and the reader-friendly language makes it easy
to comprehend. The attached photo is the perfect accent
to enhance the message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Well Done ~ Carolyn
This poetry is bright and sunny. The rhymes are not
forced and the reader-friendly language makes it easy
to comprehend. The attached photo is the perfect accent
to enhance the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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And thank you for the wonderful comments, I am so glad you enjoyed 'Harvest'. Carolyn
Comment from fairy77
That was lovely.Glad you wrote this one of the harvest.Very nicely displayed and well.Good rhymes and a nice story told:)This is well penned:)beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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That was lovely.Glad you wrote this one of the harvest.Very nicely displayed and well.Good rhymes and a nice story told:)This is well penned:)beth fairy77.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thank you Beth for the nice review. Carolyn
Comment from TOMORAL
IN that city of gold with pearly gates...what a fine bit of poetry devoted to our Lord and Savior. Beautifully written with perfect flow and meter. Your words make my mind want to turn to prayers at this very moment. Blessings.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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IN that city of gold with pearly gates...what a fine bit of poetry devoted to our Lord and Savior. Beautifully written with perfect flow and meter. Your words make my mind want to turn to prayers at this very moment. Blessings.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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And right back to you. I am so happy to hear you liked 'Harvest", thank you for the review. Carolyn
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is pretty good. I was thinking:
Heavens house
needs an apostrophe between the 'n' and 's' in Heavens to show possession.
The word 'naught in stanza 3 has an apostrophe in front of it for some reason but doesn't need one.
I think the line:
The Lord of Harvest freely bestows, the gift, of matchless Grace
does not need the two commas after 'bestows' and 'gift'
I like your choice of color; it looks like super-ripe corn and helps reinforce the title.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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This is pretty good. I was thinking:
Heavens house
needs an apostrophe between the 'n' and 's' in Heavens to show possession.
The word 'naught in stanza 3 has an apostrophe in front of it for some reason but doesn't need one.
I think the line:
The Lord of Harvest freely bestows, the gift, of matchless Grace
does not need the two commas after 'bestows' and 'gift'
I like your choice of color; it looks like super-ripe corn and helps reinforce the title.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the through review. I fixed the house :-) Carolyn
Comment from Tonulak
What I really liked about this poem was the fact that you explored your own poetic vision of your faith, rather than quote, mimic or otherwise invoke Scripture. Your statement of faith is no less for this. Well done--Ted
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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What I really liked about this poem was the fact that you explored your own poetic vision of your faith, rather than quote, mimic or otherwise invoke Scripture. Your statement of faith is no less for this. Well done--Ted
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Ted, thank you for the wonderful comments about 'Harvest'. I appreciate you, Carolyn
Comment from Gungalo
Rest now, ye weary laborers, with sickles laid aside
Rest now, forevermore to live, and with the Lord reside
Boy Carolyn this sure does take it to the Lord. Wonderful imagery and an awesome write.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Rest now, ye weary laborers, with sickles laid aside
Rest now, forevermore to live, and with the Lord reside
Boy Carolyn this sure does take it to the Lord. Wonderful imagery and an awesome write.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thanks Pam, for the kind review, I am glad you like 'Harvest'.
Have a great evening, Carolyn
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You too Carolyn.