All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Song for Rose"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Cumbrianlass
Ah, Sharyn. I've been catching up on reviewing this morning, and it's been a see-saw of laughter and tears. This is so sad, yet beautiful and positive in its sentiment.
'hush now, sweet, your work's all done.'
That just touches me so deeply. I see that she has since passed. My condolences. She's gone, I am sure, to the new beginning you mention.
Av
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
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Ah, Sharyn. I've been catching up on reviewing this morning, and it's been a see-saw of laughter and tears. This is so sad, yet beautiful and positive in its sentiment.
'hush now, sweet, your work's all done.'
That just touches me so deeply. I see that she has since passed. My condolences. She's gone, I am sure, to the new beginning you mention.
Av
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
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thx so much Av! :)Sharyn
Comment from 3boysrule
Such a sweet and lovely poem to Rose. I'm sure she is now smiling at you singer her own songs in heaven. She was 95! Amazing :-) I think you did a fantastic job on this poem. It almost flowed like a song.
Dee
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
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Such a sweet and lovely poem to Rose. I'm sure she is now smiling at you singer her own songs in heaven. She was 95! Amazing :-) I think you did a fantastic job on this poem. It almost flowed like a song.
Dee
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
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thx so much Dee! :)S
Comment from Matthew M.
This poem is a great tribute to who sounds like a wonderful woman. You both seemed ready for the next phase and made it a beautiful thing, though she will be missed. Dying peacefully is how I hope to go or get hit by a truck when I wasn't even looking.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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This poem is a great tribute to who sounds like a wonderful woman. You both seemed ready for the next phase and made it a beautiful thing, though she will be missed. Dying peacefully is how I hope to go or get hit by a truck when I wasn't even looking.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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I'd opt for the truck Matt I think ... thank you so much for your lovely six on this one! :)Sharyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Sharyn
This is beautiful Farewell Poetry. The rhymes are used
perfectly and the emotions are sincere. This poetry
tugs at the heart. The attached photo is a nice accent
that enhances the message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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Well Done ~ Sharyn
This is beautiful Farewell Poetry. The rhymes are used
perfectly and the emotions are sincere. This poetry
tugs at the heart. The attached photo is a nice accent
that enhances the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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Thx so much Ron! :)Sharyn
Comment from l.raven
I am so sorry for your loss Sharyn. She lived a very full life. 95... We don't want them to leave but we don't want them to suffer. My uncle was 99. I watched him pass. Your poem is verynicrly written. God Bless!!! Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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I am so sorry for your loss Sharyn. She lived a very full life. 95... We don't want them to leave but we don't want them to suffer. My uncle was 99. I watched him pass. Your poem is verynicrly written. God Bless!!! Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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thx Linda! :)Sharyn
Comment from ravenblack
Beautiful song. "Love stays strong like oceans roll" and the tide will carry her gently out. Years in circles/seasons spinning and now peeled from the circle, a spiral to begin a new cycle. I am sorry for your loss. It sounds like she had a full life and went out peacefully.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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Beautiful song. "Love stays strong like oceans roll" and the tide will carry her gently out. Years in circles/seasons spinning and now peeled from the circle, a spiral to begin a new cycle. I am sorry for your loss. It sounds like she had a full life and went out peacefully.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013
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She was definitely a 'character' and will be missed - and I'm thankful she finally did pass peacefully, Thx my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
A very lovely write to your mother-in-law and comforting words if she was experiencing anxieties about moving on in spirit. I enjoyed the read and think it was very sweet of you. Thanks for sharing. Your friend, Bob
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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A very lovely write to your mother-in-law and comforting words if she was experiencing anxieties about moving on in spirit. I enjoyed the read and think it was very sweet of you. Thanks for sharing. Your friend, Bob
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Bless you, Bob - yes, Rose left us this morning and I'm so glad - I really didn't want her to linger more. It was definitely her 'time' - I knew that a couple of months ago. She was definitely a 'character' and will be missed.
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from Selina Stambi
Beautiful, Twinnie. I guessed, as soon as I started reading, who you were writing about; and felt privileged to have been privy to that information.
Thought about you early this morning and wondered how she was doing.
My condolences are with your family.
Such a deep, lulling tenderness in your lines .....
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Beautiful, Twinnie. I guessed, as soon as I started reading, who you were writing about; and felt privileged to have been privy to that information.
Thought about you early this morning and wondered how she was doing.
My condolences are with your family.
Such a deep, lulling tenderness in your lines .....
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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I'm so glad she's finally gone - these last few weeks have been agonizing for her and for my husband especially. I've not been 'close' with her, but always respected her as a distinct 'character' who will definitely be missed. She had a sometimes difficult, but overall GOOD life - one can't be too sad about that, hmm? Thx my dear! :)S
Comment from Pili Pubul
Very tender and moving poem expressed from the heart. I was in coma twice, and I am sure she heard your song. I am deeply sorry for your loss,
but fortunately had a peaceful death. Big hug ... Pili
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Very tender and moving poem expressed from the heart. I was in coma twice, and I am sure she heard your song. I am deeply sorry for your loss,
but fortunately had a peaceful death. Big hug ... Pili
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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TWICE?? Wow Pili, I had no idea!
Yes, Rose passed this morning, and I'm glad it was peaceful. Thx so much my dear.
:)Sharyn
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You are most welcome. I am holding better now, killed one cancer, Lynfoma , but almost killed me. Now I still have Multiple Myeloma blood cancer, no cure but stabilize right now.
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oh my gosh Pili - what a trip! Are you also seeking alternative help and therapies?
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oh my gosh Pili - what a trip! Are you also seeking alternative help and therapies?
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oh my gosh Pili - what a trip! Are you also seeking alternative help and therapies?
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Yes , I deal with it for five years. Is six months now without chemotherapy, so grateful for that . I told you about the coma because I remember conversations , cannot respond in any way , but can hear. Hugs. Pili
Comment from fairy77
That's so sad:)and comforting!This is a beautiful song that you carved:)I love the name Rose and I love let me sing you to sleep.WoW! beautiful friend:)Sorry for your loss:(beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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That's so sad:)and comforting!This is a beautiful song that you carved:)I love the name Rose and I love let me sing you to sleep.WoW! beautiful friend:)Sorry for your loss:(beth fairy77.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Bless you Beth - yes, Rose died this morning and she'll definitely be missed. She was quite a 'character'.
:)Sharyn