All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Wildest Rainbows"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Sararb
Such a beautiful sonnet poem. I enjoyed the descriptive words describing a wonderful life with your family, but time changes things and we have to ajust to the changes, but still enjoying a different time of happiness. More time to focus on each other. You write such beautiful words! Sararb :)
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Such a beautiful sonnet poem. I enjoyed the descriptive words describing a wonderful life with your family, but time changes things and we have to ajust to the changes, but still enjoying a different time of happiness. More time to focus on each other. You write such beautiful words! Sararb :)
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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oh bless you Sararb - what a lovely surprise for me with your wonderful sixer on this one!
:)Sharyn
Comment from Selina Stambi
a sky of softest peach chiffon ... has your signature stamped all across it ..
Fabulous third quatrain and final couplet!
I have a six for you today ... hurrah!!
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a sky of softest peach chiffon ... has your signature stamped all across it ..
Fabulous third quatrain and final couplet!
I have a six for you today ... hurrah!!
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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oh we are a mutual admiration society, aren't we Bev?? and I just LOVED yours too! Bless you, big-time!:)S
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Dear sweet lady, it's not Bev ... it's Reachingfor-for-the-you-know-what!
I've been called Sharyn too once .... very flattering, considering the literary calibre of both women!
Hugs,
Sonali
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oh that is funny - well at least we're both brilliant "s"s!! :)))
Comment from steevie
Sharyn, you had me going in a certain direction with this poem, but then you switched gears and brought the reader back to reality for us to wake up and smell the stale cffee of which was the love lost in a relationship, and how you strive to revive.
Awesome write, sis
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Sharyn, you had me going in a certain direction with this poem, but then you switched gears and brought the reader back to reality for us to wake up and smell the stale cffee of which was the love lost in a relationship, and how you strive to revive.
Awesome write, sis
smiles
steve
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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thx Steve! :)S
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always a pleasure, Sharyn!!
hugs
steve
Comment from gotanenvoy
Excellent poem, you have captured the essence of growing old. Many fond memories as the body winds down, yet the mind remains strong.
I felt as if I was reading my own personal thoughts about the world around me in my twilight years. True love, based on trust and respect, is a very strong bond that time cannot break.
Well Done
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Excellent poem, you have captured the essence of growing old. Many fond memories as the body winds down, yet the mind remains strong.
I felt as if I was reading my own personal thoughts about the world around me in my twilight years. True love, based on trust and respect, is a very strong bond that time cannot break.
Well Done
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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thx so much my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from GWHARGIS
You have described what happens to couples who really have nothing in common but their children. It is sad to see what state they are in when they are faced with the empty nest. Your poem, at least, offered some hope that there may be a happy ending or at least a new beginning. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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You have described what happens to couples who really have nothing in common but their children. It is sad to see what state they are in when they are faced with the empty nest. Your poem, at least, offered some hope that there may be a happy ending or at least a new beginning. Nicely done.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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aah yes, we DEFINITELY are rooting for a happy ending here GW! :)S
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely, uplifting, bittersweet sonnet effectively conveys the theme that, when youthful passion subsides, a new, mature passion can be awakened and enjoyed.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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This lovely, uplifting, bittersweet sonnet effectively conveys the theme that, when youthful passion subsides, a new, mature passion can be awakened and enjoyed.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Bless you Janice - thank you so much for reading! :)Sharyn
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sharyn,
you captured a modern day Shakespearean experience with this sonnet. Beautifully written with all the right questions...loved Your twist and you brought it home with a breath of love that made it all just float for me.
I loved your detailed authors notes, Willy would be proud. Good luck for this contest, I'm sure you'll do well.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
******stars!!!!!!! Without a doubt!
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Hi Sharyn,
you captured a modern day Shakespearean experience with this sonnet. Beautifully written with all the right questions...loved Your twist and you brought it home with a breath of love that made it all just float for me.
I loved your detailed authors notes, Willy would be proud. Good luck for this contest, I'm sure you'll do well.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
******stars!!!!!!! Without a doubt!
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Bless you James! So glad you enjoyed this one! :)Sharyn
Comment from wordsareus
I like the use of the run on lines. This is a wonderful sonnet. I have a feeling it will be a strong contender in the contest.
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I like the use of the run on lines. This is a wonderful sonnet. I have a feeling it will be a strong contender in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Bless you & glad you like it dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from gramalot8
Very beautiful and thought provoking. It is hard to change our ways once we get in the rut, the kids leave, now what do we have in common, etc. Nice explanation for us that find a sonnet so complicated. Thanks for sharing not only the lovely poem but the poetry lesson as well.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Very beautiful and thought provoking. It is hard to change our ways once we get in the rut, the kids leave, now what do we have in common, etc. Nice explanation for us that find a sonnet so complicated. Thanks for sharing not only the lovely poem but the poetry lesson as well.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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thx so much gram! :)S
Comment from God's Writer
A deep and very beautiful poem my friend. You stand to your name, Visonary. I miss your reviews. I did like your poem, but death does not come just because you have an empty nest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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A deep and very beautiful poem my friend. You stand to your name, Visonary. I miss your reviews. I did like your poem, but death does not come just because you have an empty nest.
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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thx so much Eric! :)S