You Are My
A Contest Entry23 total reviews
Comment from hari anand
O my God without using all those prohibited words you have created a love Gem to treasure that defines nature too, exceptionally outstanding ,best of luck.
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O my God without using all those prohibited words you have created a love Gem to treasure that defines nature too, exceptionally outstanding ,best of luck.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much :)
Comment from gramalot8
I found this fantastic. I rarely give out 6's but this was definitely worth it. I loved all the ways that this person is yours. Great metaphors, descriptions, pictures painted with such wonderful imagery. Great job and I hope you do very well in the contest.
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I found this fantastic. I rarely give out 6's but this was definitely worth it. I loved all the ways that this person is yours. Great metaphors, descriptions, pictures painted with such wonderful imagery. Great job and I hope you do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you. I appreciate your most kind review and stars :)
Comment from NicciFaye
You are my sunshine, my one and only sunshine you make me happy when the skies are gray. That was the background music playing in my head as I read this. Excellent poem. You've covered everything about a love.
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You are my sunshine, my one and only sunshine you make me happy when the skies are gray. That was the background music playing in my head as I read this. Excellent poem. You've covered everything about a love.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Wildwoodflower
good comparison of your love to concrete objects, rock, willow etc and to inanimate, morning, night, reflection. I did have a hard time with "You are my down..." it doesn't seem to flow as freely as the other verses. Would like the picture better without the changing, flashing lights. Overall, nice poem and I did enjoy the read.
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good comparison of your love to concrete objects, rock, willow etc and to inanimate, morning, night, reflection. I did have a hard time with "You are my down..." it doesn't seem to flow as freely as the other verses. Would like the picture better without the changing, flashing lights. Overall, nice poem and I did enjoy the read.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Debra White
This is so beautiful and totally illustrates the love you share with your partner.
I love the alliteration that you use so subtly throughout your poem; drop/dancing, winds/winter, floating/freely etc.
Your final stanza is amazing :)
I find the flashing graphic a little distracting, but your poem is perfect :)
Good luck in the contest, Debra
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This is so beautiful and totally illustrates the love you share with your partner.
I love the alliteration that you use so subtly throughout your poem; drop/dancing, winds/winter, floating/freely etc.
Your final stanza is amazing :)
I find the flashing graphic a little distracting, but your poem is perfect :)
Good luck in the contest, Debra
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it
Comment from ~Dovey
I believe you managed to stick to all the rules and pen a love poem without the aforementioned taboo words. The artwork you chose for illustration was beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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I believe you managed to stick to all the rules and pen a love poem without the aforementioned taboo words. The artwork you chose for illustration was beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you
Comment from amada
This is a great love poem because it's very romantic and it tells of all the reasons to be romantic, such as being someone's sun, moon, stars. Nice.
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This is a great love poem because it's very romantic and it tells of all the reasons to be romantic, such as being someone's sun, moon, stars. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Gungalo
You are my reflection
in a still pond which
mirrors the truths of life
Very good write girl and you didn't use any of those words. I think it's an awesome write for sure.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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You are my reflection
in a still pond which
mirrors the truths of life
Very good write girl and you didn't use any of those words. I think it's an awesome write for sure.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you
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Smile.
Comment from l.raven
What a wonderful touching poem. I would love to pick a favorite You Are Mys but I love them all. The picture is wonderful. So very well written. love it!!!! Linda
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What a wonderful touching poem. I would love to pick a favorite You Are Mys but I love them all. The picture is wonderful. So very well written. love it!!!! Linda
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Billy Dursens
My style of writing, although I would throw in some ryhme.
Nice variety views of the importance of your relationship.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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My style of writing, although I would throw in some ryhme.
Nice variety views of the importance of your relationship.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you