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Where is spring?

The calendar lied.

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Comment from mbagby23
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I wonder myself. One it is warm then the next it is back cold. I think that you did a good job with the syllable count. I am still waiting for the weather to catch up with calendar.

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
    Thank you for reviewing.
reply by mbagby23 on 05-Apr-2013
    You're welcome.
Comment from anndimp
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Oh! It's heart rendering. The plight of the bird is painful. The poetry had nicely brought out its thoughts that moment. The syllable count for Whitney is perfect

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
    Thanks for reviewing.