My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Locked In"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from SFattempt
I really like your way of writing as i can relate so much to this poem, my comment would be is not to change anything really-love it!
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I really like your way of writing as i can relate so much to this poem, my comment would be is not to change anything really-love it!
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much for your lovely words xx
Comment from Rondeno
Trapped in a prison of commitment, obligation and learned behavior, the poet questions the nature of our social relationships and how it can be that these responsibilities come to obscure our sense of self. A subtle but powerful poem.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Trapped in a prison of commitment, obligation and learned behavior, the poet questions the nature of our social relationships and how it can be that these responsibilities come to obscure our sense of self. A subtle but powerful poem.
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much Meehal I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Jaq x