My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "Melt into me."All of my poems of release.
16 total reviews
Comment from poseytoon
Very beautiful love poem. flows nicely and read very easily.
Very nice picture, colors and presentaion. Thank you. Maybe if the last word "one" were by itself ... I dunno a little more intense.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Very beautiful love poem. flows nicely and read very easily.
Very nice picture, colors and presentaion. Thank you. Maybe if the last word "one" were by itself ... I dunno a little more intense.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Thank you posey I'll have a look at that :) Jaq x
Comment from 3boysrule
Very nice poem. It flowed beautifully and your message was clear and harmonious. I also loved the picture you used - it really fit nice with the poem!
Dee @3boysrule
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Very nice poem. It flowed beautifully and your message was clear and harmonious. I also loved the picture you used - it really fit nice with the poem!
Dee @3boysrule
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Dee much appreciated :) Jaq x
Comment from GeraldS
This is very well put together: artwork, narrative, and colors.
The message is expressed clearly and effortlessly by the words chosen. The sentiment is expressed in a memorable way.
This was pleasant to read, and a treat to review.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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This is very well put together: artwork, narrative, and colors.
The message is expressed clearly and effortlessly by the words chosen. The sentiment is expressed in a memorable way.
This was pleasant to read, and a treat to review.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much Gerald x
Comment from Patricia1
Good job! This is a well written piece with an obvious love of great passion and intimacy for one another. I like the style, form you chose, and description of the love. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Good job! This is a well written piece with an obvious love of great passion and intimacy for one another. I like the style, form you chose, and description of the love. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review Patricia :) Jaq xx
Comment from Rondeno
It's weird, reviewing a poem in which I appear (as you'll soon find out, mo chara!) The poem is wonderful, with lovely, sensual images, all cast in language chosen carefully for its task. And the art work is beautiful.
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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It's weird, reviewing a poem in which I appear (as you'll soon find out, mo chara!) The poem is wonderful, with lovely, sensual images, all cast in language chosen carefully for its task. And the art work is beautiful.
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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I wrote it around the picture. I loved it as soon as I saw it. :) Thanks for your lovely review my friend :) xx
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What was your "feeling" all about this morning?
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Just something silly. Having a hard time at work and the mind was in overdrive :) Jacqueline x
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I wish I could help you get out of that job.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is very well written you express your self well with the strong romantic feeling I enjoyed regards Jill
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Hello my friend this is very well written you express your self well with the strong romantic feeling I enjoyed regards Jill
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Jill always nice to hear your thoughts my friend :) Jaq x