And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Mercy's Rain"A collection of Spirtual poems
56 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A clarion call for mercy's rain what that brings forth and what happens to people without, a nice poem has good flow of thoughts, colourful images and visual projection with flash of rain's effect and bearing upon pop.
28-168-44419-Reviews Written-Thursday 14 March 2013-Ex FS Top Rank # 1 Reviewer
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A clarion call for mercy's rain what that brings forth and what happens to people without, a nice poem has good flow of thoughts, colourful images and visual projection with flash of rain's effect and bearing upon pop.
28-168-44419-Reviews Written-Thursday 14 March 2013-Ex FS Top Rank # 1 Reviewer
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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I appreciate yur comments, best to you always, Carolyn
Comment from Reddy Rimer
It's a beautiful title and poem. You share much wisdom in this insightful write.
Even your author notes are wise, shedding further light on your poetry. "How can one have a beautiful rainbow without first having the rain." How true this is.
It takes the Lord of light to rescue those who cannot recognize His hand of mercy.
Connie
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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It's a beautiful title and poem. You share much wisdom in this insightful write.
Even your author notes are wise, shedding further light on your poetry. "How can one have a beautiful rainbow without first having the rain." How true this is.
It takes the Lord of light to rescue those who cannot recognize His hand of mercy.
Connie
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thanks Connie, I always enjoy your reviews and kind comments. Carolyn
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
This is a great poem with a theme I am passionate about. I love the artwork choice. God's mercy displayed for all to see. I especially liked this stanza:
Quickly come, Oh Lord of Light
Rescue those from life's sad plight
Strengthen hearts to feel no strain
Touched once more with much to gain
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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This is a great poem with a theme I am passionate about. I love the artwork choice. God's mercy displayed for all to see. I especially liked this stanza:
Quickly come, Oh Lord of Light
Rescue those from life's sad plight
Strengthen hearts to feel no strain
Touched once more with much to gain
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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What a nice review, thank you so much, I am glad you liked the message. Carolyn
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You are very welcome. MN :)
Comment from visionary1234
lovely poem, but it's NOT an "ABC" poem - do take another peek at the prompt - you're meant to use four letters of continuous ABC, and the 5th line is something else. :)S
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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lovely poem, but it's NOT an "ABC" poem - do take another peek at the prompt - you're meant to use four letters of continuous ABC, and the 5th line is something else. :)S
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review, The win for me in this one is that it has been enjoyed. :-) And you are right I fell short on the form. I pray to do better next time. I appreciate you, Carolyn
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no biggie - we're all learning Carolyn. :)
Comment from Candyjean
The picture you picked out is as beautiful as your poem. I loved how smooth and easy to read. There was a desperation felt upon reading that made me hope for the best till the very end. Great job.
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The picture you picked out is as beautiful as your poem. I loved how smooth and easy to read. There was a desperation felt upon reading that made me hope for the best till the very end. Great job.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for such a lovely review. Best always, Carolyn
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
A very thought provoking poem notesandmore. I read it twice, and enjoyed it.
"Inept to feel sweet Mercy's rain" is a brilliant line. Good rhyming and flow to the poem. It held my interest from beginning to end. Your accompanying artwork is a great pic to go with your piece.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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A very thought provoking poem notesandmore. I read it twice, and enjoyed it.
"Inept to feel sweet Mercy's rain" is a brilliant line. Good rhyming and flow to the poem. It held my interest from beginning to end. Your accompanying artwork is a great pic to go with your piece.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you Connie for the wonderful review, I am glad you enjoyed it.Best to you always, Carolyn
Comment from allborn66
This is a very nice poem. It communicates its message well. I love the word choice. The theme is very apparent. The picture is nice.
Barbara
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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This is a very nice poem. It communicates its message well. I love the word choice. The theme is very apparent. The picture is nice.
Barbara
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Barbara, I appreciate your kind review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from hifein
a little mercy goes a long way!!. this is a lovely poem emphasizing the positive response to gain by learning how to live beyond jealousy, greed and evil. well written with a smooth flow, yet with depth and intensity.
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a little mercy goes a long way!!. this is a lovely poem emphasizing the positive response to gain by learning how to live beyond jealousy, greed and evil. well written with a smooth flow, yet with depth and intensity.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
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Your review is lovely. Thank you for taking the time to read. My best to you, Carolyn
Comment from Curt Mongold
Very nice sentiment that you have penned in lovely rhymes and an easy flow that carries your message easily to the reader.
There are many negative emotions that can dampen one's ability to give, or receive mercy. In fact, I think they all do.
Sincerely,
Curt
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Very nice sentiment that you have penned in lovely rhymes and an easy flow that carries your message easily to the reader.
There are many negative emotions that can dampen one's ability to give, or receive mercy. In fact, I think they all do.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you Curt for your wonderful insight. As usual you leave me with something to think about as well. Regards, Carolyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This gets my last six and gladely give it up as theis is a wonderful poem and it flows so smothly as you follow the ABC pattern. I live the piece and I mean live. Those are the kinds that I like. Absolutley wonderful
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This gets my last six and gladely give it up as theis is a wonderful poem and it flows so smothly as you follow the ABC pattern. I live the piece and I mean live. Those are the kinds that I like. Absolutley wonderful
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Wow, Barb, thank you for such an outstanding review. I am so happy you like the poem and that you can personally relate. You must be one sweet lady. Carolyn