Comment from Candyjean

Excellent

I truly love this poem and using the letters to shepherd worked out well for you. Each line was a message unto itself, but no works of art can contain all He is, your expression was wonderful.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

Thank you Candyjean, I am glad you liked the poem. You are so right no amount of praise could ever be enough.

Comment from Cedar

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your beautiful entry and the picture you have chosen really matches your words very well. I don't think the site will say anything, but all blind entries aren't supposed to show any names. I wish you good luck. Bill

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

Thanks Bill, I realized it after I had saved. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. :-)

reply by Cedar on 14-Feb-2013

You can edit your poem anytime before the deadline. I've even edited a few during the voting process. It doesn't say in the rules that you're not allowed to do that. Take care my friend. Bill

Comment from poetic1988

Excellent

this is a beautiful poem about faith & Jesus

from the poem, it sounds like you talking about what Jesus means to you
which I think is great

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

Thank you for your insightful review. :-)

Comment from Siouxsun

Excellent

Nicely done acrostic poetry depicting the true shepherd and the heart of a follower. The art work goes really well with the poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

Thank you for the review and the good luck. :-)

Comment from LaDonnaCole

Good

Sinless was He
Holy example to me
Eternal in existence
Patients personified
Heavens mansions design
Everlasting son-shine
Reigns in Glory
Delighted to be His


I think you meant patience, a virtue, not patients as in people in a hospital?

Beautiful poem. These acrostics fascinate me.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

You are so right, thanks for catching. and for the review. Carolyn

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

I apologize for signing I realized it after I saved. :-(

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

A nice Bible acrostic, and so true. Good luck in the contest.

Patients (Patience) personified

Heavens (Heaven's) mansions design

Everlasting son-shine (Son-shine)

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

I appreciate your critique so much. I'll pay closer attention.
:-)

Comment from PoeticXscape

Good

A nice little poem but who is about is it from the shepherd to god? shepherd to the lambs? Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

Thank you for your review. Throughout the Old and New Testament the shepherd appears as synonymous with God. The best known passage is Psalms 23, 'The Lord is My Shepherd.'