My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "Wide, Scary World."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Lisa Charlie
Good poem! Vulnerability does come in all shapes and sizes. Most of us have no idea what it is that makes the other so vulnerable. This makes my heart sad. Good writing!
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Good poem! Vulnerability does come in all shapes and sizes. Most of us have no idea what it is that makes the other so vulnerable. This makes my heart sad. Good writing!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for a lovely review.
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Because of the contrasting colours, I find this almost impossible to read - even with my sunglasses on. :-)
Clever every 4th line rhyme, though I still classify as free verse.
Agoraphobia must be a rotten disability. I hope it's not true in your case, but you've expessed the condition very well and poetically.
Best wishes, Ray
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Because of the contrasting colours, I find this almost impossible to read - even with my sunglasses on. :-)
Clever every 4th line rhyme, though I still classify as free verse.
Agoraphobia must be a rotten disability. I hope it's not true in your case, but you've expessed the condition very well and poetically.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
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Lol cheers Ray for a fun review as always my friend. :)
Comment from RYME4U
This poem describes agoraphobia very well. It is a very scary condition and it affects a person's entire life style.
The rhythm of the poem is well done and the "Scream" illustration is well chosen. Good job!
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This poem describes agoraphobia very well. It is a very scary condition and it affects a person's entire life style.
The rhythm of the poem is well done and the "Scream" illustration is well chosen. Good job!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much RYME4U. Much appreciated review as ever. :)
Comment from expressions9
Your poem really captivates the emotions of someone with agoraphobia well with excellent imagery. It sounds as though they tried to get help and were told to correct their thinking .. "flawed psychology".
This must be a very depressing condition. Well done on a great contest entry!
Regards,
Christine
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Your poem really captivates the emotions of someone with agoraphobia well with excellent imagery. It sounds as though they tried to get help and were told to correct their thinking .. "flawed psychology".
This must be a very depressing condition. Well done on a great contest entry!
Regards,
Christine
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much Christine for your lovely review x
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You're welcome :)
Christine
Comment from Starlit Ink
The poem is artistically presented, and helps to set the mood of the piece. It would be hard to have agoraphobia, and to be afraid of the big world out there. I think that we all have this to some degree, especially since there is so much evil out there. It's a good entry, so good luck.
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The poem is artistically presented, and helps to set the mood of the piece. It would be hard to have agoraphobia, and to be afraid of the big world out there. I think that we all have this to some degree, especially since there is so much evil out there. It's a good entry, so good luck.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
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Thank you Starlit Ink for yet another lovely review.