Fly
How we are helpless before these tiny creatures16 total reviews
Comment from AlvinTEthington
A very amusing poem and oh, so true! The internal rhyme in the last line works well. I do like the alliteration of the third line. Nice work.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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A very amusing poem and oh, so true! The internal rhyme in the last line works well. I do like the alliteration of the third line. Nice work.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem and thank you for the generous stars.
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You're welcome. I was very disappointed in the poem that won--it wasn't very sophisticated.
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Well, winning depends on the votes,doesn't it? Only two people voted for me .but i am happy that some of you liked my poem.It is encouraging.
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Yes, I was one of those two.
Comment from October21
This is so true! I find myself afraid of insects and sometimes I think it is pathetic, as they are much smaller than I am and they cannot do me harm. Great idea.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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This is so true! I find myself afraid of insects and sometimes I think it is pathetic, as they are much smaller than I am and they cannot do me harm. Great idea.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Tithonus50
An interesting perspective of insects, an entertaining and well put together poem. I like the idea that something so small has a purpose to affect us within.
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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An interesting perspective of insects, an entertaining and well put together poem. I like the idea that something so small has a purpose to affect us within.
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much.
Comment from TOMORAL
Oh I love this one. The worse feeling in the world is to get a fly in your ear. And how do they know doing that will drive you crazy? You said it all in a mini poem. Great Job.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Oh I love this one. The worse feeling in the world is to get a fly in your ear. And how do they know doing that will drive you crazy? You said it all in a mini poem. Great Job.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Keeper Tony
This is a cracking little piece of verse that creates some vivid imagery which will get many readers nodding in acknowledgement i am sure. Holds the attention and delivers good impact. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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This is a cracking little piece of verse that creates some vivid imagery which will get many readers nodding in acknowledgement i am sure. Holds the attention and delivers good impact. Nicely done.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much for your generous comments.Thank you for taking time to read my poem.
Comment from rjuselius
i agree, nothing can be more annoying than a fly buzzing next to your ear. except of course a blood thirsty mosquito.
happy holidays!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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i agree, nothing can be more annoying than a fly buzzing next to your ear. except of course a blood thirsty mosquito.
happy holidays!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much.