Trojan Verse
On courting my muse31 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is indeed very well written my friend you have given the reader everything making them think well done I enjoyed a very strong poem regards Jill
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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This is indeed very well written my friend you have given the reader everything making them think well done I enjoyed a very strong poem regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you Jill.
Comment from God's Writer
An excellent poem dear one. You have such a beautiful mind. Well thought out and presented. Thank you for writing this insightful poem.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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An excellent poem dear one. You have such a beautiful mind. Well thought out and presented. Thank you for writing this insightful poem.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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Thank you Erick for saying that I have a beautiful mind. It makes my day.
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You do dear one. I am glad to have made your day.
Shalom,
Erick
Comment from Alan K Pease
The poem title fits the verse in an excellent fashion. At times we have conflict with our muse who may want to do one thing and us another. Your poem is loaded with effective metaphor and that alone deserves comment. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes for the Holidays.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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The poem title fits the verse in an excellent fashion. At times we have conflict with our muse who may want to do one thing and us another. Your poem is loaded with effective metaphor and that alone deserves comment. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes for the Holidays.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you Alan for reading and enjoying my work. Best Holidays to you and family as well.
Comment from juliedickson55
Very nice.
I like the metaphor you present in the Trojan Verse, an encapsulated hold, protected interior...
I love this line:
"forgetting the light, you will have to interpret the dark"
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Very nice.
I like the metaphor you present in the Trojan Verse, an encapsulated hold, protected interior...
I love this line:
"forgetting the light, you will have to interpret the dark"
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you Julie for reading my work and for quoting your fave lines!
Comment from robina1978
I seem to remember Trojan is stressed, unstressed and so on.
I like how you write about what your muse does and you are not responsible for it.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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I seem to remember Trojan is stressed, unstressed and so on.
I like how you write about what your muse does and you are not responsible for it.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you Ine!
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very welcome
Comment from mystery poet
The muse is a mighty beast, is he/she not?
Sometimes I don't like him much, other times
I think he must be Hercules. Place the blame
on him/her, who cares so it's in my pen name.
Who cares???
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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The muse is a mighty beast, is he/she not?
Sometimes I don't like him much, other times
I think he must be Hercules. Place the blame
on him/her, who cares so it's in my pen name.
Who cares???
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you for commenting in Trojan Verse. Oh yes, my muse can become quite controversial sometimes. Love it or leave it, sometimes.
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Love it or leave it. I like that.
The pleasure was mine...
Comment from Bryana
Excellent poem my dear friend. It has certainly made think.
These are my favorite lines...
I will blind you with the fierce branding iron
like the deep inner calling of a psalm.
Hugs
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Excellent poem my dear friend. It has certainly made think.
These are my favorite lines...
I will blind you with the fierce branding iron
like the deep inner calling of a psalm.
Hugs
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Hi my dear friend! Hope you are doing just great. Thanks for reading my work.
Comment from steevie
This is quite the provocative poem you penned. I love your write, but I'm a little bit afraid at the same time. The wording you used has me enthralled with the prospect of a meaning so deep, that I fear I will not return unscathed.
awesome writye
steve
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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This is quite the provocative poem you penned. I love your write, but I'm a little bit afraid at the same time. The wording you used has me enthralled with the prospect of a meaning so deep, that I fear I will not return unscathed.
awesome writye
steve
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thanks Steve for thinking so highly of my work here. For sure, it makes my day!
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I'm so glad that I made your day. Knowing that, totally has made my day.
Have a great day, Amada
steve
Comment from EMB
This is a great poem that seems to speak to those who don't know the power of the Internet. It reminds me of articles I've read of how people get themselves into trouble via email. "Before you hit 'send,' rethink your decision!" That's what this poem seems to be saying on some level. At least, that's how I'm taking it. :)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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This is a great poem that seems to speak to those who don't know the power of the Internet. It reminds me of articles I've read of how people get themselves into trouble via email. "Before you hit 'send,' rethink your decision!" That's what this poem seems to be saying on some level. At least, that's how I'm taking it. :)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you Edward for reading my work and for your very awesome comments.
Comment from 9999pool
Writing in FS is usually a no holds barred if you mark correctly the explicit content not suitable for children. Trojan verses are the verses of deceit as in the Trojan horse story. Brilliant write. Poets should heed the advice. As far as the psalms is concerned, readers should use their discretion.Good poem. Needs no changes. Brilliant!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Writing in FS is usually a no holds barred if you mark correctly the explicit content not suitable for children. Trojan verses are the verses of deceit as in the Trojan horse story. Brilliant write. Poets should heed the advice. As far as the psalms is concerned, readers should use their discretion.Good poem. Needs no changes. Brilliant!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you for reading my work and saying "Brilliant!" A word that makes me smile...
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yes, simply brilliant and even galiant as in a poetic creative variant. Now that should make you smile a bit more. LOL. Brilliant is a good word in The English people's world. better than excellent. Cheers. Richard.
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:-)