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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Writhing Wraiths"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. Great job with your poem. It probably would have been best to highlight and bold the first letters. I liked your choice of words though. The X is what I always find difficult. Xena was a good character name. I also liked how you included Lucifer and his Fiends instead of friends. Good luck in the contest and cheers.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Hello. Great job with your poem. It probably would have been best to highlight and bold the first letters. I liked your choice of words though. The X is what I always find difficult. Xena was a good character name. I also liked how you included Lucifer and his Fiends instead of friends. Good luck in the contest and cheers.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you Benjamin
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the novice witches. They must first learn to watch their words. Some will take them literally. Great work.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the novice witches. They must first learn to watch their words. Some will take them literally. Great work.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from sunnilicious
Completely original and very creative Abecedarian Poem. It is well thought out. Also placed in a good nutty story. Nicely done. Great job. GOod luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Completely original and very creative Abecedarian Poem. It is well thought out. Also placed in a good nutty story. Nicely done. Great job. GOod luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Sunni
Comment from hifein
This was wonderful, wonderfully poetic, visual, imaginative and creative. at first i thought you were referring to something literary, perhaps Shakespearean, but I see you made it all up. Very clever the way you interspersed your wraiths into this abecederian format. i loved it.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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This was wonderful, wonderfully poetic, visual, imaginative and creative. at first i thought you were referring to something literary, perhaps Shakespearean, but I see you made it all up. Very clever the way you interspersed your wraiths into this abecederian format. i loved it.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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I am so happy for your review . Thanks
Comment from eowyn0003
I really enjoyed your poem. It has delightful images, strong rhythm with minimal rhyme. You could tighten up your language a little. Make every word count, make every word work. Good imagery, nice rhythm.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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I really enjoyed your poem. It has delightful images, strong rhythm with minimal rhyme. You could tighten up your language a little. Make every word count, make every word work. Good imagery, nice rhythm.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thanks vor the review. I'll look at it.
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. I like both the repetition you used as well as the imagery. It also has both a spiritual feel as well as an intimate feel. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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This is an interesting piece. I like both the repetition you used as well as the imagery. It also has both a spiritual feel as well as an intimate feel. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 30-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Thanks for that excellent review Mai Mai
Comment from Slythytove2
One doesn't usually think of witches "sashaying" but why not? A fun piece full of promise as you indicate in your notes. Mechanical sound and worded with strong images.And an interesting photo too.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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One doesn't usually think of witches "sashaying" but why not? A fun piece full of promise as you indicate in your notes. Mechanical sound and worded with strong images.And an interesting photo too.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you Sly
Comment from Cletus Hardiman
Hi! I think it took a lot of imagination to write this! LOL I enjoyed indulging myself into this poem. Thanks for sharing it with all of us! Cletus Hardiman
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Hi! I think it took a lot of imagination to write this! LOL I enjoyed indulging myself into this poem. Thanks for sharing it with all of us! Cletus Hardiman
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thanks Cletus. Glad you indulged and wrote a nice review.
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You are so welcome, my friend! Cletus Hardiman
Comment from Galactia
This is an excellent written Abecedarian Poem. told a great story and flowed and read so smoothly.
GL in the contest, i think you'll do well
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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This is an excellent written Abecedarian Poem. told a great story and flowed and read so smoothly.
GL in the contest, i think you'll do well
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thanks for the review and the encouragement.
Comment from 9999pool
The poem does fulfill its requirements. But because it is an animated still, the challenge is somewhat diminished in trying to assess the skill of the writer in a contest. But that being said, the poem does invoke a story of the three young witches. The imagery is excellent and the story has a story line. Well done and good work of art in animated still. Cheers.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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The poem does fulfill its requirements. But because it is an animated still, the challenge is somewhat diminished in trying to assess the skill of the writer in a contest. But that being said, the poem does invoke a story of the three young witches. The imagery is excellent and the story has a story line. Well done and good work of art in animated still. Cheers.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thanks for the review.
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Welcome. Cheers.