Comment from 4tulips

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem as you put words to the various perspectives of the autumn season. Autumn does have any parts to it besides the falling of leaves. It is the end of new growth, the time for farmers to bring in their yields from the fields. And with these we have the cooler weather that brings the colors of our falling leaves. I enjoyed your poem, you did a good job.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012

Thank you so very much!!! Debbie

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Debbie, once again I find this an interesting form and I might even decide to give it a try sometime, thanks to your inspiring work! This is lovely, and very imaginative. Nicely done! (I'd love to know more about this form!)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012

It is a form I was introduced to in my writing group. I haven't looked it up yet. Guess it is just called a perspective poem. I'll look into it more son!!! Thank you!!! Debbie

reply by Dawn Munro on 12-Oct-2012

You are welcome.

Comment from writingdream7

Excellent

This was neat to read... I liked number seven: "Quiet autumn
proceeds the storm of holiday season." Thanks for writing and sharing!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012

Thank you so very much!!! Debbie

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

deb - what a wonderful job you did weaving this verse - well written and most enjoyed - loved the formatting and flow as well as the use of imagery - thanks for the notes and the read

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012

Thank you, my friend!!! Debbie