Forever Entangled
Love Poem 5/7/517 total reviews
Comment from JennyB32
A very beautiful scene you painted with your poetry. I love how you left with the words "never untangled". Those words instilled a sense of comfort in me. Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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A very beautiful scene you painted with your poetry. I love how you left with the words "never untangled". Those words instilled a sense of comfort in me. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much
Comment from janeyv
A lovely 5-7-5, the syllables are spot on,and the theme is consistent throughout the poem creating a story with so few words. A very good write...Thank you Jane
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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A lovely 5-7-5, the syllables are spot on,and the theme is consistent throughout the poem creating a story with so few words. A very good write...Thank you Jane
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you, Jane.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
The reference to a strong knot is appropriate to the thought of a true love. Poem is according to the 5-7-5 syllable form required by the contest. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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The reference to a strong knot is appropriate to the thought of a true love. Poem is according to the 5-7-5 syllable form required by the contest. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thanks, Jeanie.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a cool poem very well written I like the feel and the picture enhances it good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing it was an epic poem
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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This is a cool poem very well written I like the feel and the picture enhances it good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing it was an epic poem
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Epic poem might be a stretch, but I thank you so much for this generous review.
Comment from Penworthy
You've got that right! There are tangles and then there are tangles. Sensual and relationship tangles are the order of the day in all couples. The duet is a combination which features a lot of fun and hard work. Your poem brings this out.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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You've got that right! There are tangles and then there are tangles. Sensual and relationship tangles are the order of the day in all couples. The duet is a combination which features a lot of fun and hard work. Your poem brings this out.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you! This is a great review, and you gave insight into my own poem!
Comment from EMB
This is a great addition to the contest. It tells a short tale of love, just as the rules suggest AND it sticks with the format. The only suggestion I have would be "lover's knot."
Great poem.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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This is a great addition to the contest. It tells a short tale of love, just as the rules suggest AND it sticks with the format. The only suggestion I have would be "lover's knot."
Great poem.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thak you, I changed that. I appreciate you pointing that out.
Comment from terry drake
5-7-5 syllable count verse format challenge successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations on your entry to the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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5-7-5 syllable count verse format challenge successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations on your entry to the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you