All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "We'll Take Two!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is a fine quatern with the thought and love for summer
ringing so loudely. I think it says the preference of many for summer over winter. I go for your line of 'Warm days keep love from growing cold.'
ola thomas
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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This is a fine quatern with the thought and love for summer
ringing so loudely. I think it says the preference of many for summer over winter. I go for your line of 'Warm days keep love from growing cold.'
ola thomas
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thx Ola!
Comment from hari anand
Fun and interesting summer poetry,describes all he colors of summer joy, no winters plesae, Yes we will take two. Liked it.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Fun and interesting summer poetry,describes all he colors of summer joy, no winters plesae, Yes we will take two. Liked it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thx Mba!
Comment from KrisKris
My friend,this so deserved every the winning position,it was so good,well written and worded,great job,and yea i agree no winter too lol.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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My friend,this so deserved every the winning position,it was so good,well written and worded,great job,and yea i agree no winter too lol.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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yeah!!! someone after my own heart! thx Kris! :) Sharyn
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
What a fun and light-hearted quatern. Congrats on winning the contest with this enjoyable poe. I'll take another summer, just not quite as hot!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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What a fun and light-hearted quatern. Congrats on winning the contest with this enjoyable poe. I'll take another summer, just not quite as hot!!! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thx so much Debbie! well in Hawaii we've hardly even HAD a summer this year ! it's been rainy and cool for most of it, do you believe? Might have to move FURTHER south!! :) Sharyn
Comment from TammyGail
Happy to see you won the contest girlie
this made for a great read
i think I'll take the same
thanks for sharing
and congrats
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Happy to see you won the contest girlie
this made for a great read
i think I'll take the same
thanks for sharing
and congrats
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thx Tammy! I'm happy as it means I don't have to sweat so many reviews to post work! at least this week! How on EARTH do you manage to post so much!?? :) Sharyn
Comment from Heaven Bound
Very beautifully written. Great picture. While I agree with the idea of making not having all the "fun" of winter, I sure would hate to miss fall. Thanks.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Very beautifully written. Great picture. While I agree with the idea of making not having all the "fun" of winter, I sure would hate to miss fall. Thanks.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thanks HB! :) Sharyn
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Isn't that just the most idyllic picture to illustrate summer? Your quatern works fabulously well and you're repeating line sounds very natural. Congratulations on winning the contest. Giddy.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Isn't that just the most idyllic picture to illustrate summer? Your quatern works fabulously well and you're repeating line sounds very natural. Congratulations on winning the contest. Giddy.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thx so much Giddy! appreciate it!!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from JennaG
This was so good! Congratulations on your win! It was definitely well deserved. I loved the creative approach you took to this writing prompt. Instead of taking on a somber tone about the passing of summer you made your poem fun and uplifting. I loved it! It was like a breath of fresh air in the contest. Great, great job! It was such a fun poem to read. Thanks for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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This was so good! Congratulations on your win! It was definitely well deserved. I loved the creative approach you took to this writing prompt. Instead of taking on a somber tone about the passing of summer you made your poem fun and uplifting. I loved it! It was like a breath of fresh air in the contest. Great, great job! It was such a fun poem to read. Thanks for sharing! :)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thx Jenna! can't stand boring poetry dear! bless you :) Sharyn
Comment from gazzagodbod
love the summery feel of this one and to be honest it is as close to the summer i have got this year the uk has just rained all summer sigh thank you xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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love the summery feel of this one and to be honest it is as close to the summer i have got this year the uk has just rained all summer sigh thank you xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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ikky! that's why I don't live in the UK dear!!! though it's beautiful, it would drive me NUTS! :) Sharyn
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem speaks of everyone's, except for maybe skiers, wish.
That summer would never end. But life's sequence would alter to much if this would happen. You also weave a metaphor of love never ending too.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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This poem speaks of everyone's, except for maybe skiers, wish.
That summer would never end. But life's sequence would alter to much if this would happen. You also weave a metaphor of love never ending too.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thx so much dp!
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Your so very welcome, visionary.
dp