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Comment from Misrael
Very short, sweet and to the point. The short ones seem to be better because they can be remembered better. I hink that you did a good job in writing this because of the word count.I especially liked the ending because of how the other people came to help out. Good read and good job. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Very short, sweet and to the point. The short ones seem to be better because they can be remembered better. I hink that you did a good job in writing this because of the word count.I especially liked the ending because of how the other people came to help out. Good read and good job. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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I was going to enter this in a 200 word short story contest, but I missed the deadline. I was originally going to have Wink run over, but decided on the high road instead. Thanks for reviewing me.
Comment from Bina1
Excellent write, I was hoping they were there to "fix" him up as well. Next time, I guess! Great start that could be expanded if you cared to. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Excellent write, I was hoping they were there to "fix" him up as well. Next time, I guess! Great start that could be expanded if you cared to. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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I was going to enter this in a 200 word short story contest, but I missed the deadline. I was originally going to have Wink run over, but decided on the high road instead. Thanks for reviewing me.
Comment from Gungalo
LOL very good Bill. It shows that the women have a greater responsibility and stick to it. Too bad for Winona. She could have it so much better, eh?
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LOL very good Bill. It shows that the women have a greater responsibility and stick to it. Too bad for Winona. She could have it so much better, eh?
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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I was going to enter this in a 200 word short story contest, but I missed the deadline. I was originally going to have Wink run over, but decided on the high road instead. Thanks for reviewing me.
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I'll bet you were!!