Comment from tasettrini

Excellent

I hear passion in your life and birth of tending to a garden. A flower garden enchanted of a path in life's garden.Your metaphors were lovely in expressed visual expression.A light announced flow of a love. Thank you for the share.

 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 28-May-2012

Thanks or reviewing. I noticed a missing stanza when I re read.I fixed it.

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

This poem is very well-written and paints vivid pictures for your readers to envision...you have a good command of word usae. God bless.

 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 28-May-2012

Thank you for reading. when I copied an entire stanza was missing. I reentered. It explains the relationship of lily and lila.

Comment from guinea

Excellent

Beautiful writing about a vision of death. The words flow nicely. The rhyming is great. The imagery is good. Shows deep thinking.

 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 28-May-2012

Thanks for reading. I noticed that an entire stanza was missing that explained lilly and lila. I reentered.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

Thank you for your nice poem I really enjoyed reading it it was very well written and I liked the picture it was very calming well done

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 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 28-May-2012

thanks for reading.

Comment from RalphNater

Excellent

Loved it Dallas. You paint such a vivid picture here. "a group of garden misfits" wonderful. And I really liked "A sigh engulfs the silence
she slips in sweet repose
into the secret garden
where reclamation plants a rose"

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 Comment Written 28-May-2012

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reply by the author on 28-May-2012

Thank you for reviewing.