Human Nature
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Comment from adewpearl
Good use of mono-rhyming in each tercet.
I really like your use of questions that directly address and engage the reader.
You deliver a most thoughtful message in this inspiring poem :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Good use of mono-rhyming in each tercet.
I really like your use of questions that directly address and engage the reader.
You deliver a most thoughtful message in this inspiring poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you so much, Brooke, for this really lovely review!! xsx
Comment from patsypats
I really like the way you have raised questions about our well being. The way you have displayed these questions captures the readers undivided attention and has them answering to these words. You've come across intense, yet emotional, I like that combo, always seems to get the point across. Nicely written I have nothing to critique:)
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I really like the way you have raised questions about our well being. The way you have displayed these questions captures the readers undivided attention and has them answering to these words. You've come across intense, yet emotional, I like that combo, always seems to get the point across. Nicely written I have nothing to critique:)
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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What a lovely review! Thank you so much, Patsypats, I am so pleased you liked it, thank you! xsx
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Sandra,
The metre's fine, the rhyme's divine
And, as you go on line by line
The whole poem flows like sweet white wine
Regards
Reg
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Dear Sandra,
The metre's fine, the rhyme's divine
And, as you go on line by line
The whole poem flows like sweet white wine
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Reg, that was amazing!! Loved it! Thank you for this really wonderful review, amazing! xsx
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! Sandra, this is such an absolutely wonderful poem of hope and relief when you are down. These mono rhyming triplets are superbly written here girl. Well done indeed ma'am.
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Wow! Sandra, this is such an absolutely wonderful poem of hope and relief when you are down. These mono rhyming triplets are superbly written here girl. Well done indeed ma'am.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Oh, thank you so much, Chris, what a really lovely review!! Thank you ! xsx
Comment from misscookie
Great poem
Youexpress what a lot of people are feeling
i love how your poem flows and you had my attention from the first line to the ast.I live by your last line
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Great poem
Youexpress what a lot of people are feeling
i love how your poem flows and you had my attention from the first line to the ast.I live by your last line
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you Miss Cookie, we all have problems at the moment, whether it is money worries, jobs, bills, so many things today can bring us down and a little bit tetchy and upset. It can't last, can it? Thanks again for this lovely review! xsx
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Your very welcome. My grandmother use to say bad times don't last forever.
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She was a very wise woman! xsx
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Oh, the apples doesn't fall far from the tree( smile)
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I already knew that!!
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until next time
Comment from Merajul
I wish I had a six star! You won't believe I had a brawl with one of my office calleague and I escalated it to the higher level.Probably , a timely read could have saved the situation. Nice lines-
If you sometimes feel your temper fly,
if you sometimes feel you want to cry,
that's human nature, so don't ask, 'Why?'
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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I wish I had a six star! You won't believe I had a brawl with one of my office calleague and I escalated it to the higher level.Probably , a timely read could have saved the situation. Nice lines-
If you sometimes feel your temper fly,
if you sometimes feel you want to cry,
that's human nature, so don't ask, 'Why?'
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Your words are a 6 to me, Merajul! Thank you for such a lovely review! How are my two little stars? Would you give them a big hug for me, please. xsx
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Surely & certainly! They ,too, are remembering you!smile.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, I love this. The rhyming tercets are dead on. Each with their own unique rhyme scheme.
You raise a lot of questions that we sometimes fail to see or plainly do not want to see.
Your last tercet is absolutely perfect and well stated.
I did not give you the six but for any other reason than it was that good.
Your choice of artwork is perfect. Excellent, exceptional and my favorite,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Sandra, I love this. The rhyming tercets are dead on. Each with their own unique rhyme scheme.
You raise a lot of questions that we sometimes fail to see or plainly do not want to see.
Your last tercet is absolutely perfect and well stated.
I did not give you the six but for any other reason than it was that good.
Your choice of artwork is perfect. Excellent, exceptional and my favorite,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you so much, Jim, for the lovely review and the 6 stars! This us such an amazing review, thank you! Sandra xsx
Comment from artemis53
Excellent read. "Why" is always so overused as in "Why me?" I usually say "why not" which usually puts them into a boiling point but I'm tired of the self proclaimed martyrs.
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Excellent read. "Why" is always so overused as in "Why me?" I usually say "why not" which usually puts them into a boiling point but I'm tired of the self proclaimed martyrs.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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I must remember that! I have a little grandson, whose vocabulary is mainly, why, even after I have explained! Thank you for this lovely review!xsx
Comment from heyjude
Sandra, very well written. I especially like the part
about the future being in our hands and we can bury
our heads in the sand or we can learn. Hopefully from
our experiences we do learn and grow. Thanks for sharing
these thoughts.
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Sandra, very well written. I especially like the part
about the future being in our hands and we can bury
our heads in the sand or we can learn. Hopefully from
our experiences we do learn and grow. Thanks for sharing
these thoughts.
Comment Written 03-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you for your really nice review, heyjude! I think too many of us bury our heads in sand! Thank you again, xsx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Sandra, that would be today. No real reason, other than financial concerns. Somedays, I suppose, as you wrote, the best of us flounder. Is it hormonal? Full moon? Wrong side of the bed? Take your pick. I appreciate reading this today. Somehow, knowing we're not alone in these happenings, helps.
One spag: perhaps to (too) fast
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Sandra, that would be today. No real reason, other than financial concerns. Somedays, I suppose, as you wrote, the best of us flounder. Is it hormonal? Full moon? Wrong side of the bed? Take your pick. I appreciate reading this today. Somehow, knowing we're not alone in these happenings, helps.
One spag: perhaps to (too) fast
Comment Written 03-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you Sue, I think I could go with all those reasons at some time or other. Oh and thanks for the spag, I went straight in and put it right!!! xsx