The Red Dress
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Comment from debskatz
Hi Alexis,
Geez, I don't even know what to say. You worked out all the kinks that just a couple of chapters ago, I thought would be impossible. LOVE she got married in a red dress, that was great! I only wish you could've worked something in with Alan's parents being present, did Alan get a job, was Lisa going to university. Our imagination's good, but... lol
Thank You for providing such an entertaining story. Ya done good, girl!!
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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Hi Alexis,
Geez, I don't even know what to say. You worked out all the kinks that just a couple of chapters ago, I thought would be impossible. LOVE she got married in a red dress, that was great! I only wish you could've worked something in with Alan's parents being present, did Alan get a job, was Lisa going to university. Our imagination's good, but... lol
Thank You for providing such an entertaining story. Ya done good, girl!!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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Oh, didn't I tell you? there's actually six chapters left! They have six children, and Nicks not dead but becomes their Nanny in chapter 53. Oh, and Lisa's mother gets pregnant aged 62 because she gave up booze and had hormone treatment. Well as I keep saying, never say never...I've really enjoyed the journey with you aboard. Thank you, Debs. Alexis x
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LOL!! Okay, bring it on!! lol :-D
Comment from AlexAX
Awww what a sweet ending. So the best man was Richard? I'm glad she got married in her red dress. They are perfect together. So many twists and turns, an excellent book. The ending for Nick was the best, no longer can he bring harm to them. Wish you all the best for getting it published. It will be a best seller :) Thanks for posting. Alex :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Awww what a sweet ending. So the best man was Richard? I'm glad she got married in her red dress. They are perfect together. So many twists and turns, an excellent book. The ending for Nick was the best, no longer can he bring harm to them. Wish you all the best for getting it published. It will be a best seller :) Thanks for posting. Alex :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Well, I couldn't get rid of him, could I? He was a real good guy throughout and always had Lisa's best interests at heart. Thank you so much for your lovely review and encouraging comments. Alexis x
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Haha no you couldn't. You're welcome. I have really enjoyed it. I will be first in queue at your book signing when you come down here :) Alex :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, alexis, you did a great job writing this ending where lisa is rescued and they're married with her wearing her beautiful red dress....
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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this is very well written, alexis, you did a great job writing this ending where lisa is rescued and they're married with her wearing her beautiful red dress....
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, not just for this lovely review but all the lovely encouraging reviews you have written before. Alexis x
Comment from olliebuster
This is well elucidated, full of suspense. I have not read the other chapters, but I guess it was the end of a long running jealous affair. Alan was lucky the cops were there, but then that is what love does to you. The dialogue is nicely separated to hold the interest and relieve possible boredom. A good ending. All's well that ends well. A good read. Olliebuster.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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This is well elucidated, full of suspense. I have not read the other chapters, but I guess it was the end of a long running jealous affair. Alan was lucky the cops were there, but then that is what love does to you. The dialogue is nicely separated to hold the interest and relieve possible boredom. A good ending. All's well that ends well. A good read. Olliebuster.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Phew! Just glad to have finished it. Thank you so much for your lovely review. Alexis x
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The pleasure was mine. Ollie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Oh my heart this is a fabulous ending...love ever after'
.....sigh.....
This is a big successful book my friend. Fantastic all the way...
And I loved that they ended up together....just what I wanted:)
Thanks for much for a fantastic read.
Great job indeed.
Maureen
xxx
wc
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Oh my heart this is a fabulous ending...love ever after'
.....sigh.....
This is a big successful book my friend. Fantastic all the way...
And I loved that they ended up together....just what I wanted:)
Thanks for much for a fantastic read.
Great job indeed.
Maureen
xxx
wc
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Well, I only have 25 reviews to thank people for and then I have to start again. Don't think you're going to get rid of me now I've finished this one wc! Well spotted, I've stopped him running all over the place! Love Ya Alexis x
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LOL book number three.....:)
I'm all ready....love ya xx
wc
Comment from hellion5
Wonderful ending--suspenseful action. Congratulations on finishing it.
vocal cords were paralysed with fear.--great!
circling her left nipple through the silk--love this!
Great job on the whole thing. Can't wait to see this in print--
Sue
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Wonderful ending--suspenseful action. Congratulations on finishing it.
vocal cords were paralysed with fear.--great!
circling her left nipple through the silk--love this!
Great job on the whole thing. Can't wait to see this in print--
Sue
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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I really appreciate your reviews and encouragement throughout. Thank you. Alexis x
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You're very welcome--
Sue
Comment from peggles
This complete story was very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting captivating read
Descriptive wording and heartwarming romantic ending
I enjoyed reading this very much and am delighted with the well rounded finish your foot note added to the satisfaction and closure of the red dress
I hope you put this out to be published I am sure many others will enjoyed this fine work
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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This complete story was very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting captivating read
Descriptive wording and heartwarming romantic ending
I enjoyed reading this very much and am delighted with the well rounded finish your foot note added to the satisfaction and closure of the red dress
I hope you put this out to be published I am sure many others will enjoyed this fine work
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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You couldn't say anything nicer, or more encouraging. Thank you so much for all your support. Alexis x