The Red Dress
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "The Red Dress chapter forty-eight."The story of a teenage girl
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Comment from AlexAX
The build is as excellent as ever. Nick feels like he is in total control and taking full advantage of that fact. Lisa feels helpless and alone. She still has her fighting spirit though, answering him back like that. More cliff hangers as they lost them on route. I saw just one thing .. "You don't think I really want to kill you, do you, Lisa?" He asked."(no"). Alex :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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The build is as excellent as ever. Nick feels like he is in total control and taking full advantage of that fact. Lisa feels helpless and alone. She still has her fighting spirit though, answering him back like that. More cliff hangers as they lost them on route. I saw just one thing .. "You don't think I really want to kill you, do you, Lisa?" He asked."(no"). Alex :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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My last but one thank you for all your wonderful input and encouragement throughout. You have been so in tune with the characters and story all the way along. Thank you so much. Alexis x
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, alexis, you did a great job writing this chapter where lisa is caught in nick's trap and alan is trying desperately to find her. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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this is very well written, alexis, you did a great job writing this chapter where lisa is caught in nick's trap and alan is trying desperately to find her. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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You're a diamond! Thank you so much for your review and all your fantastic support. Alexis x
Comment from peggles
I have read other chapters and
i think the detail is still good
Your dialog is believable
The flow is good
I liked this chapter and
look forward to reading more
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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I have read other chapters and
i think the detail is still good
Your dialog is believable
The flow is good
I liked this chapter and
look forward to reading more
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Almost time to say goodbye on this one, Peggles. Thank you so much for your continued reviews and support. Alexis x
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I think I am going to need a few glasses of wine myself soon.....This is a nail biting chapter. Filled to the brim and overflowing with excellence.
Your work excellent as always.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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I think I am going to need a few glasses of wine myself soon.....This is a nail biting chapter. Filled to the brim and overflowing with excellence.
Your work excellent as always.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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I am almost hesitant to finish thanking everyone for their wonderful reviews throughout. You, my friend, have been so encouraging throughout. Thank you wc. Love Alexis xxx
Comment from Carrie Carson
Exciting plot action with Lisa being kidnapped. The way the story steps you through brings you to the scene.
The story doesn't have an unexpected item at the chalet scene. The liquor and black nightie are frequently used. Maybe an inexplicable item would add more interest. What else is going on in the abductor's mind?
Again, exciting time of the story.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Exciting plot action with Lisa being kidnapped. The way the story steps you through brings you to the scene.
The story doesn't have an unexpected item at the chalet scene. The liquor and black nightie are frequently used. Maybe an inexplicable item would add more interest. What else is going on in the abductor's mind?
Again, exciting time of the story.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and top tips. Just one chapter after this and it's all over. Phew! Alexis x