The Red Dress
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "The red dress chapter thirty seven"The story of a teenage girl
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Well shit, my heart is bloody aching, pulse pounding and I want to bang their two bloody heads together.....boy oh boy....I need the bleedin Kleenex...
Excellent work, sad and powerful and bloody horrid.....get busy and post the next chapter.....:)
Thanks for sharing the sorrow...
Maureen
xxo
" "Come on, Lisa." He cajoled. "It was just a bit of fun. You wanted to get laid, and I needed someone to shag until Carla got home" // shag won't be known as what you intended...over here it would be a fuck,:)
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Well shit, my heart is bloody aching, pulse pounding and I want to bang their two bloody heads together.....boy oh boy....I need the bleedin Kleenex...
Excellent work, sad and powerful and bloody horrid.....get busy and post the next chapter.....:)
Thanks for sharing the sorrow...
Maureen
xxo
" "Come on, Lisa." He cajoled. "It was just a bit of fun. You wanted to get laid, and I needed someone to shag until Carla got home" // shag won't be known as what you intended...over here it would be a fuck,:)
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Morning Honey, I've opted for screw! Oh this is becoming such fun, sharing this story. I'm starting to feel sooooo optimistic! Thank you for yet another wonderful, encouraging review. SBC xxx
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Aha see I didn't even think of that word. Yup fits perfectly!
Loving your story my friend.
Hugs
Maureen
wc xx
Comment from AlexAX
Wow I have been waiting for this phone call and I knew they would both hide their true feelings. Very explosive chapter. Good emotions, descriptions and dialogue. It's a pity one of them didn't slip up though ... maybe next time they will ;) lol I'm sure it's not over fully between them. I just saw one thing .. beautiful car from Nick on (her) eighteenth birthday. Alex :)
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2012
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Wow I have been waiting for this phone call and I knew they would both hide their true feelings. Very explosive chapter. Good emotions, descriptions and dialogue. It's a pity one of them didn't slip up though ... maybe next time they will ;) lol I'm sure it's not over fully between them. I just saw one thing .. beautiful car from Nick on (her) eighteenth birthday. Alex :)
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2012
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I thought you might enjoy it! Many thanks for your eagle eye and great review. Alexis x
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You're welcome :) Alex.