Comment from debskatz

Excellent

Hi Alexis,

ah, gee, girl! I've never seen more mis-communication in my entire life! It's soooooooo frustrating!!!

You're not going to believe it. I didn't find any spag! I thought maybe I should go back through it, as I just can't believe it, but...

I knew it!

"No(,) I'm sorry, it's not Alan. It's his fianc©e(,) Carla.

Okay, the world is turning the right way again. Whew! lol

GREAT chapter! Though damn frustrating. Hurry up with the next one!

smiles,

deb

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012

Oh, please boss, can't I have a day off? My eyes are out on watery stalks, and my children are getting fat having to live off pizza! Oh, okay, I'll see what I can do...

reply by debskatz on 03-Feb-2012

That's a good little minion! lol :-)

Comment from MumEsGirl

Excellent

Oops lots of near misses before we finally Carla and Lisa make contact.

Lively and fast moving. Loks like Lisa might just have to go back to Nick after all. I'm sure you are going to tell me too - NOT

hugs
kate

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012

No chance! Thank you my friend, your enthusiasm is so invigorating. (Just wish my eyeballs could keep up! Alexis x