The Red Dress
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Comment from James McCorkle
Your characters are all quite believable and have interesting lives with lots of drama and excitement thrown into the mixing bowl. When stirred and cooked to a finale, they taste great. James.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Your characters are all quite believable and have interesting lives with lots of drama and excitement thrown into the mixing bowl. When stirred and cooked to a finale, they taste great. James.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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What a lovely way to put it, James. Yet again you inspire me. Thank you so much. Alexis x
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You are doing fine Alexis. All the Best. james.
Comment from gramalot8
Alexisleech, this is a good chapter. I loved the feelings that you expound on from Lisa. Good job of the interaction and dialog between your characters. Thanks for sharing with us.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Alexisleech, this is a good chapter. I loved the feelings that you expound on from Lisa. Good job of the interaction and dialog between your characters. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Alexis x
Comment from MumEsGirl
Alexis how could you do this to me? I was waiting all day for the blasted letter.
Great writing that captures the turmoil Lisa is going through at the moment.
Could you not have let Amy snatch it from her :(
hugs
kate
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Alexis how could you do this to me? I was waiting all day for the blasted letter.
Great writing that captures the turmoil Lisa is going through at the moment.
Could you not have let Amy snatch it from her :(
hugs
kate
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Lol, you are funny! I tried but my muse just wouldn't let me. Don't worry, help is on it's way...
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Got the next chapter - phew.
kate