The Red Dress
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Another great chapter.
Even though no hot juicy sex follows I must still say that this is a chapter that really showcased "regret" you still pulled the reader through the same emotion.
Your writing is fabulous my friend....whether or not its juicy....woops sorry...concentrate wee c**
Great work with the characters inner play within the story.
You consistently deliver and I am consistently awed at your craft weaving this story into greatness.
Love it. Very well done my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Another great chapter.
Even though no hot juicy sex follows I must still say that this is a chapter that really showcased "regret" you still pulled the reader through the same emotion.
Your writing is fabulous my friend....whether or not its juicy....woops sorry...concentrate wee c**
Great work with the characters inner play within the story.
You consistently deliver and I am consistently awed at your craft weaving this story into greatness.
Love it. Very well done my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Now, WC, do you understand how important your reviews are to me? You have filled me with so much confidence and encouragement, you invigorate me. I pass it on! Love you, Alexis x
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That's what WC do....:)
love ya back
xo
Comment from debskatz
Hi Alexis,
Well, I'm glad the love birds got it all sorted out. But Alan needs to be a decent guy and man up.
I enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next one!
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Hi Alexis,
Well, I'm glad the love birds got it all sorted out. But Alan needs to be a decent guy and man up.
I enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next one!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much Deb, I'm off to start work on it as soon as I've answered all the reviews. Thank you so much for your continued support. Alexis x
Comment from Hareem.S
I am sooo relieved to read this chapter. Poor Lisa, you have very vividly penned down he hopeless state. I am glad Alan realised his mistake, not every man does. Glad they made up in the end. Wonderful,rivetting chapter.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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I am sooo relieved to read this chapter. Poor Lisa, you have very vividly penned down he hopeless state. I am glad Alan realised his mistake, not every man does. Glad they made up in the end. Wonderful,rivetting chapter.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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I know, it's such a shame when a guy loses the love of his life because he's too proud to admit that he's wrong! His loss, every time... Alexis x
Comment from robyn corum
A gopod chapter. I couldn't help reading this one to see what happened. If you don't mind me saying so, the denouement was quite a let down. I realize they had to make up, but it was so easy. (Sorry, I know she sat outside and he felt guilty...)
picked up his can of larger. -> lager?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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A gopod chapter. I couldn't help reading this one to see what happened. If you don't mind me saying so, the denouement was quite a let down. I realize they had to make up, but it was so easy. (Sorry, I know she sat outside and he felt guilty...)
picked up his can of larger. -> lager?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you for picking up on that (you would think a Scot would know how to spell lager! I can understand the ending seeming a little flat if you haven't read some of the other chapters, but most of the relevance is because of things that have gone on in the past. My sincere thanks for your review. Alexis x
Comment from Madmum
read two chapters so far and am hooked, am going to have to go back and read the beginning. well written, good characters and easy to get into. good job.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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read two chapters so far and am hooked, am going to have to go back and read the beginning. well written, good characters and easy to get into. good job.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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You couldn't pay me a greater compliment. Thank you so much! Alexis x
Comment from KinaSalad
Hi there Alexisleech, I enjoyed reading your story here, it is well written and it flowed and kept my attention. Thanks so much for sharing
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Hi there Alexisleech, I enjoyed reading your story here, it is well written and it flowed and kept my attention. Thanks so much for sharing
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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The pleasure is mine. Thank you so much. Alexis x
Comment from krazykats2011
I come in on chapter 17; but, now that I have, I am going to have no choice but to become a fan so that I can go back and read from the start. I enjoyed this chapter and am glad the tea wasn't needed, afterall. lol Kathie
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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I come in on chapter 17; but, now that I have, I am going to have no choice but to become a fan so that I can go back and read from the start. I enjoyed this chapter and am glad the tea wasn't needed, afterall. lol Kathie
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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You have made my day! Thank you so much. Alexis x
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Glad I could contribute.