The Red Dress
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "A virgin no more..."The story of a teenage girl
36 total reviews
Comment from RebelRose
I am sorry I haven't been keeping up with this all along. This is a very well-written and interesting post. I will try to back-track and catch up.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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I am sorry I haven't been keeping up with this all along. This is a very well-written and interesting post. I will try to back-track and catch up.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for the great review. Alexis x
Comment from dhee khaye
I already read one of your chapter and I mark it Excellent, now, I am doing the same thing too. Keep it up until the very end. And I believe That you can sell it.
dhee
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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I already read one of your chapter and I mark it Excellent, now, I am doing the same thing too. Keep it up until the very end. And I believe That you can sell it.
dhee
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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Your review is music to my ears. Thank you so much. Alexis x
Comment from Fluffyhead
Sensual without being slutty . If this was a color it would be red. It feels very real. Love the phrasing and wordage too.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Sensual without being slutty . If this was a color it would be red. It feels very real. Love the phrasing and wordage too.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much. You have interpreted this chapter exactly as I hoped. Alexis x
Comment from rightforyou
This is novelistic
I enjoyed this story along with the writing and works very well. Your characters are believable and true to life and I think anyone will be taken up with your story and want to read more of it.Great job on this chapter very well done...Ron
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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This is novelistic
I enjoyed this story along with the writing and works very well. Your characters are believable and true to life and I think anyone will be taken up with your story and want to read more of it.Great job on this chapter very well done...Ron
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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You have no idea what the word 'novelistic' means to me. It has always been my dream to get published one day, and using terminology like that regarding this chapter, makes the possibility more tangible. Thank you. Alexis x
Comment from ScarletClearwater
I'm glad she realizes that sex is something to be shared and doesn't have to be scary. I liked the use of dialogue as well. It was a great read.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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I'm glad she realizes that sex is something to be shared and doesn't have to be scary. I liked the use of dialogue as well. It was a great read.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. I must admit this was quite a hard chapter to write because your always worried that you might cause offence! Alexis x
Comment from c_lucas
A great hook at the end. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. A couple finds love after experiencing a sad love affair. Very good.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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A great hook at the end. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. A couple finds love after experiencing a sad love affair. Very good.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your review, Charlie. Alexis x
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You're welcome, alexis. Charlie
Comment from Tawnyowl
Very good quality erotica. It is truly erotic and not cheap porn. It is so difficult to avoid the latter but you do so here unfailingly, by keeping it sensual and believable and better class. This is novelistic writing and works very well. Your characters are believable and true to life and I think anyone will be taken up with your story and want to read it.
Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Very good quality erotica. It is truly erotic and not cheap porn. It is so difficult to avoid the latter but you do so here unfailingly, by keeping it sensual and believable and better class. This is novelistic writing and works very well. Your characters are believable and true to life and I think anyone will be taken up with your story and want to read it.
Well done!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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You couldn't pay me a greater compliment. Thank you so much for your wonderful review and sizzling six. Both are greatly appreciated. Alexis x
Comment from nomi338
Rarely will you find the telling of a sexual relationship that is both exciting, somewhat graphic and tastefully done all at the same time. Somehow you managed to do just that and I applaud you. Your skillful writing is very evident in the wonderful way you have crafted this story so far. The events that have occurred so far do not seem far fetched at all, but rather very natural. This is a very well written story and I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Rarely will you find the telling of a sexual relationship that is both exciting, somewhat graphic and tastefully done all at the same time. Somehow you managed to do just that and I applaud you. Your skillful writing is very evident in the wonderful way you have crafted this story so far. The events that have occurred so far do not seem far fetched at all, but rather very natural. This is a very well written story and I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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What a wonderful compliment, thank you so much! Alexis x
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi alexisleech
Hmm, good chpater, graphic, interesting dialogues, plenty of action and good narrative. Very realistic discussion, especially the "heart to heart" between the lovers.
Well done.
Patrick
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Hi alexisleech
Hmm, good chpater, graphic, interesting dialogues, plenty of action and good narrative. Very realistic discussion, especially the "heart to heart" between the lovers.
Well done.
Patrick
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I must admit it was quite a hard chapter to write as I knew the readers were expecting this kind of chapter and I wanted it to be graphic, but tasteful. Your review is gratefully appreciated. Thank you. Alexis x
Comment from The Stranger
quite a nice story with equally enjoyable references to Scotland, as a couple begin their journey together as a couple in life, most exquisite
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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quite a nice story with equally enjoyable references to Scotland, as a couple begin their journey together as a couple in life, most exquisite
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Alexis x