The Red Dress
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Comment from debskatz
Hi alexis,
She was gone? What the heck do you mean, she was gone? Geez...
Boy, am I looking forward to the next chapter!!
MUCH better on the "thats" and stuff today. Didn't find:
"long journey to Chelmsford(,) Lisa"
There was another one, but I can't find it now. But much better, my friend!
smiles,
deb
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Hi alexis,
She was gone? What the heck do you mean, she was gone? Geez...
Boy, am I looking forward to the next chapter!!
MUCH better on the "thats" and stuff today. Didn't find:
"long journey to Chelmsford(,) Lisa"
There was another one, but I can't find it now. But much better, my friend!
smiles,
deb
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Sorry...couldn't resist it! Next two chapters posted. Phew! Alexis x