Comment from Thomas Vaughan

Excellent

Five stars. What else? So many memories and so funny to read about them now. Why, we were primitives, still wondering where the light came from when we pressed the switch. The TV cabinet was as big as a wardrobe, and the Man From Uncle lived in a 14" black and white screen. Thank you for reminding me. Now I 'm awash with nostalgia.

Hugz

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2005

Comment from gigimarie

Excellent

I loved this poem! The stream-of-consciousness feel about it conjured many thoughts and memories in me. Bringing "When" back in every so often adds to the nostalgic feel of this. I like the subtle jabs at today's "let it all hang out" with the references to the Kotex commercials. This was a real pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2005

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

i love your very wicked and sassy view at the world
i am a closet wicked myself...so reading your wonderful
poems make me laugh, make me cry and make me
realize how much talent is floating around out there
in the world...thanks for the read and looking forward.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2005