The Red Dress
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Comment from Misrael
This is going to prove to be a very interesting story and I look forward to reading more in the future.I know that I have probibly missed some but it has still been good. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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This is going to prove to be a very interesting story and I look forward to reading more in the future.I know that I have probibly missed some but it has still been good. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Alexis x
Comment from LisaSilva
Yay! She just may have met the man that will take her away from all this. In my first marriage, I thought I was frigged. I didn't like sex or so I thought. I was a virgin and he was inexperienced too. My second, I found a man with a magic touch. After all these years it's still hot! Finding the right person is better than all the riches in the world! I love it! Thank you. Love your stuff!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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Yay! She just may have met the man that will take her away from all this. In my first marriage, I thought I was frigged. I didn't like sex or so I thought. I was a virgin and he was inexperienced too. My second, I found a man with a magic touch. After all these years it's still hot! Finding the right person is better than all the riches in the world! I love it! Thank you. Love your stuff!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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That's amazing, the reason I found this so easy to write is because that's exactly what happened to me! My first husband was convinced that I didn't like sex. I thought I didn't either until I met my second husband. Boy am I glad I did!
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Good grief, mother from hell it seems. It amazes me all that she did to Lisa and got away with....
This chapter was another great nail in the witches cell of madness.
I am so worked up that I am shaking my head and reminding my self...fictional story......great work on that creation of emotion and imagery in this chapter.
Scared the wits out of me with the scissors.....
Ok so now onward we go to Alan's who has a girlfriend....with out her luggage, or papers and I must wait and see what happens with Nick....love triangles are making my head spin....
Great overall work as always...one wee nit I picked up other wise I was ready to knock Fiona down and grab the suitcases.... :)
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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"('"'m) taking you home with me," he announced, before turning on the ignition. // "I'm
I'm ready for a glass of wine now:)
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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Good grief, mother from hell it seems. It amazes me all that she did to Lisa and got away with....
This chapter was another great nail in the witches cell of madness.
I am so worked up that I am shaking my head and reminding my self...fictional story......great work on that creation of emotion and imagery in this chapter.
Scared the wits out of me with the scissors.....
Ok so now onward we go to Alan's who has a girlfriend....with out her luggage, or papers and I must wait and see what happens with Nick....love triangles are making my head spin....
Great overall work as always...one wee nit I picked up other wise I was ready to knock Fiona down and grab the suitcases.... :)
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Edit check:
"('"'m) taking you home with me," he announced, before turning on the ignition. // "I'm
I'm ready for a glass of wine now:)
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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Lol, you do make me laugh! Thank you, my friend. As usual your review brought a smile to my face!
Comment from James McCorkle
I'd like to give you six for this continuation of the plot Alexis. I think the Mother is a crazy drunken witch, and pooe little Lisa is in a bit of a fix right now. Where are she and Alan going now, I mean in their relationship, not road destination. The thot plickens. Great stuff. Full marks again. James
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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I'd like to give you six for this continuation of the plot Alexis. I think the Mother is a crazy drunken witch, and pooe little Lisa is in a bit of a fix right now. Where are she and Alan going now, I mean in their relationship, not road destination. The thot plickens. Great stuff. Full marks again. James
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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I would love a six, James! (or were you just teasing?) As usual you have understood the chapter perfectly. Thank you. Take care, Alexis x
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You make it easy. james.
