The Red Dress
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Comment from MumEsGirl
Nice writing in this one. Alan is a bit of a lad isnt he. And Lisa is no angel either.
Shaping up well now with a little intrigue and young love for good measure
kate
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Nice writing in this one. Alan is a bit of a lad isnt he. And Lisa is no angel either.
Shaping up well now with a little intrigue and young love for good measure
kate
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Well they are only human aren't they? Of course not, it's fiction! Glad your enjoying. Now that I've introduced all the main characters (for now) things start to speed up a bit thank goodness! Thank you for your review, it's really appreciated. Alexis x
Comment from I am Cat
Very nicely done! I really liked this. I'm ready to move to the next chapter! (Actually, I need to go back to the other chapters... Having NOT read those, I can't really say anything about inconsistency or anything like that... Anything about the characters and whether or not they seemed to say or do the right things... nope. And your punctuation seems solid.
Your spelling is great, Grammar passes too... I love the plot so far...
What else is there? LOL... It flows nicely.
Well done.
Cat
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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Very nicely done! I really liked this. I'm ready to move to the next chapter! (Actually, I need to go back to the other chapters... Having NOT read those, I can't really say anything about inconsistency or anything like that... Anything about the characters and whether or not they seemed to say or do the right things... nope. And your punctuation seems solid.
Your spelling is great, Grammar passes too... I love the plot so far...
What else is there? LOL... It flows nicely.
Well done.
Cat
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much! I would be delighted if you got the chance to read more. Take care, Alexis x