The Red Dress
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Comment from mr elis
I really enjoyed this story the setting can be anywhere and everywhere in high society of today.A seven teen year old,convent school girl and a millionaire bachelor on an island,just think of such an opportunity,her mom saw in less, than second, she was willing to let Lisa join- Nick.opportunities come and go,when her daughter's chance came mom,was sure Lisa,would embrace it.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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I really enjoyed this story the setting can be anywhere and everywhere in high society of today.A seven teen year old,convent school girl and a millionaire bachelor on an island,just think of such an opportunity,her mom saw in less, than second, she was willing to let Lisa join- Nick.opportunities come and go,when her daughter's chance came mom,was sure Lisa,would embrace it.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for grasping the situation so easily! As you say, in today's society the setting of rich and famous can be just about anywhere, and mothers wanting their daughters to marry a wealthy man, is universal!
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I'll be please to ready the next chapter.
Comment from MumEsGirl
Great introduction to Nick our hero of the hour. However, the story line doesnt seem to gel with what happened in the previous two chapters. I dont recall a father being present or the family being weatlhy enough to go on holidays.
I am obviously missing something here.
kate
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Great introduction to Nick our hero of the hour. However, the story line doesnt seem to gel with what happened in the previous two chapters. I dont recall a father being present or the family being weatlhy enough to go on holidays.
I am obviously missing something here.
kate
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Hope that my reply to your lovely review for chapter four has cleared things up. Just to cause further confusion, chapter five is set in Dunoon, Claire's parents weekend house. All will hopefully be explained then! My thanks again for your review, Alexis x