A Most Important Date
tooth fairy12 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
You definitely capture the point of view of a child in this delightful little story. I remember the school plays I performed in and then the ones my children performed in and how very proud and excited children get over their roles in these productions, which seem so glamorous to them :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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You definitely capture the point of view of a child in this delightful little story. I remember the school plays I performed in and then the ones my children performed in and how very proud and excited children get over their roles in these productions, which seem so glamorous to them :-) Brooke
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your thoughtful review Brooke. This one could definitely be expanded but I wanted it to be from this little 9 year old's perspective. Thank you, you give me confidence it might have worked.
Comment from Modee
haha. Very nice from a kid's view. Very excited to be in the play. the picture is very cute also. I didn't count the words...are there at least a hundred..? No matter..still cute. :)
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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haha. Very nice from a kid's view. Very excited to be in the play. the picture is very cute also. I didn't count the words...are there at least a hundred..? No matter..still cute. :)
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Hi Modee, Yes exactly 100 ... thank you for your thoughtful review.