Comment from peggles

Excellent

I had to goggle antebellum to discover it meant former plantation house never heart the word before
I enjoyed reading this
what a great fun wedding day
Full to the brim of fun and happiness
I enjoyed reading this very different poem
Well done
Best wishes for the contest

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011

Thank you Peggles for your kind review of my poem. Guess, I should have included the definition in my author's notes. I'm from the South and just didn't realize that everyone does not know about the antebellum homes. :o) Of course, how could they?:O) It is a very Southern thing. :o)

Comment from Mariea

Excellent

Well written and very funny, would love to have seen the look on the old ladies faces.

Structure - well put together and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - slightly interrupted but generally a nice easy flow.

Hugs Mia

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011

Thanks Mia, this is a poem I wanted to write for quite some time but have struggled with it's rhythm. Thanks for the stars and the kind review. I appreciate them.