Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Cloaked Writer
Dear Author,
Her Purpose is an intense poem which the author strives and succeeds to inform the reader of how a number of violent acts and misfortunes have struck her life, and which she tried to bury them inside her soul. I admire your courage to reveal such powerful information in an unique expression. I like your poetic writing style in the beginning.
Brave work,
The Masked Writer
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Dear Author,
Her Purpose is an intense poem which the author strives and succeeds to inform the reader of how a number of violent acts and misfortunes have struck her life, and which she tried to bury them inside her soul. I admire your courage to reveal such powerful information in an unique expression. I like your poetic writing style in the beginning.
Brave work,
The Masked Writer
Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from islandergirl
Wow! Brilliantly done. Sometimes a woman doesn't know what to do with pent up anger like that. Rape by anyone has an impact on a woman's life that's indescribable.You get filled with this burning hatred and you don't know what to do with it until you find the perfect outlet to let everything out. And even then, it still hurts you. It hurts you every second of your life.
Great poem. It touched me.
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Wow! Brilliantly done. Sometimes a woman doesn't know what to do with pent up anger like that. Rape by anyone has an impact on a woman's life that's indescribable.You get filled with this burning hatred and you don't know what to do with it until you find the perfect outlet to let everything out. And even then, it still hurts you. It hurts you every second of your life.
Great poem. It touched me.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from shelley kaye
*your note was cut off: [This elaborates the subject of the] :P
yes i totally agree that writing poems is therapy
and this poem goes to prove that sometimes the best ones are the ones with the fewest words
been there... your not alone... still there sometimes lol
great job and writing your feelings in poetic form
and thanx for sharing
:)
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*your note was cut off: [This elaborates the subject of the] :P
yes i totally agree that writing poems is therapy
and this poem goes to prove that sometimes the best ones are the ones with the fewest words
been there... your not alone... still there sometimes lol
great job and writing your feelings in poetic form
and thanx for sharing
:)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from Cosette
Well, dear, I always, always give this note to people I care about. The color scheme, even reversed is very, very hard to read. It distracts terribly from your powerful words when one must squint to see them. For your work to sell, it must be presented in a way the reader doesn't have to fight to find the words. Having done so with this piece, it was worth the efforts. Your full circle message is well delivered and simply stunning.
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Well, dear, I always, always give this note to people I care about. The color scheme, even reversed is very, very hard to read. It distracts terribly from your powerful words when one must squint to see them. For your work to sell, it must be presented in a way the reader doesn't have to fight to find the words. Having done so with this piece, it was worth the efforts. Your full circle message is well delivered and simply stunning.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
That you do, my friend. And wonderful poetry it is. Always so full of your voice and your soul. You might want to tone the color down on this one. Just a thought, a little hard on the older eyes.
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That you do, my friend. And wonderful poetry it is. Always so full of your voice and your soul. You might want to tone the color down on this one. Just a thought, a little hard on the older eyes.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from puredichotomy
its like an introduction and a brief explanation into why this person is the way she is. the words have a line each when they are the brutal and raw ones its like a punch in the stomach when you see them. great.
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its like an introduction and a brief explanation into why this person is the way she is. the words have a line each when they are the brutal and raw ones its like a punch in the stomach when you see them. great.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from Mrs Jones
You and me both Jewell and many more. Not crazy about the presentation but I am rating you on your words and your courage.
Well done
Rose
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You and me both Jewell and many more. Not crazy about the presentation but I am rating you on your words and your courage.
Well done
Rose
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from AtticusOnline
This is an amazing poem of heartache and eventually of teaching by sharing. This flowed very well, and could be read evenly. The stops "until one night" and BUT- go perfect with the poem. It hurts to read it :-( so much emoiton.
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This is an amazing poem of heartache and eventually of teaching by sharing. This flowed very well, and could be read evenly. The stops "until one night" and BUT- go perfect with the poem. It hurts to read it :-( so much emoiton.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
Comment from Diny
Very unique style?
As I read, you pulled me in
What else does she have to say?
Write On Write OFTEN
and write well,
I shall continue to read,
DINY
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Very unique style?
As I read, you pulled me in
What else does she have to say?
Write On Write OFTEN
and write well,
I shall continue to read,
DINY
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2004
