Interlude
An Idyll Poem85 total reviews
Comment from jpafford
This is definitely 'over the top' ...your well written words of nature match your choice of photo perfectly and your choice of descriptive words to express the natural beauty was just perfect.
good job
joanne
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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This is definitely 'over the top' ...your well written words of nature match your choice of photo perfectly and your choice of descriptive words to express the natural beauty was just perfect.
good job
joanne
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your great review joanne...glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Janie King
Idyll poem..I never heard of this style but then I'm not an educated poet..It is written beautifully and full of very picturesque words. Great poem. God bless.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Idyll poem..I never heard of this style but then I'm not an educated poet..It is written beautifully and full of very picturesque words. Great poem. God bless.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...blessings.
Comment from gazzagodbod
wow what a lovely poem loved the picture and the poem took me to a beautiful place thanks so much and all the best in the contest gazza
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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wow what a lovely poem loved the picture and the poem took me to a beautiful place thanks so much and all the best in the contest gazza
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much gazza, for your words...blessings.
Comment from bulbul
The description of nature replete with meadow, willow , wild flowers, the scent of lilacs, and warm sunshine leads up to the final thrill of a lover's kiss. A ten line poem that captures it all. Good.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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The description of nature replete with meadow, willow , wild flowers, the scent of lilacs, and warm sunshine leads up to the final thrill of a lover's kiss. A ten line poem that captures it all. Good.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing bulbul...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
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you're welcome. bulbul
Comment from Glasstruth
I like the simple rhyming pattern, flows well in a short poem. At first your poem is strictly about nature, then you take a beautiful romantic turn when you say, "I meet your eyes, desire stirs within." You keep the poem interesting, and passion from the heart is always a beautiful ending.
Les
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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I like the simple rhyming pattern, flows well in a short poem. At first your poem is strictly about nature, then you take a beautiful romantic turn when you say, "I meet your eyes, desire stirs within." You keep the poem interesting, and passion from the heart is always a beautiful ending.
Les
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much Les, for your great review...blessings.
Comment from livelylinda
Author,
Highly descriptive nature poem entwined with romance. Good rhyme and rhythm. A smooth read which quickly leads the reader down a beautiful lane. Good writing.
livelylinda
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Author,
Highly descriptive nature poem entwined with romance. Good rhyme and rhythm. A smooth read which quickly leads the reader down a beautiful lane. Good writing.
livelylinda
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much livelylinda, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from rama devi
Lovely poetic picture adn descriptives. the artwork choice is delightful too, and enhances your composition perfectly. The rhyming, flow and form are all fine. Good consonance of S sounds throughout. Also fine assonances.
Well done.
No nits but I do have a suggestion for your kind consideration--I think the poem would be fine without any end-line punctuation...it is easy to see where phrasing stops and starts. it would look less cluttered that way, though it is also fine to keep it.
Good luck in the contest.
warmly, rd
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Lovely poetic picture adn descriptives. the artwork choice is delightful too, and enhances your composition perfectly. The rhyming, flow and form are all fine. Good consonance of S sounds throughout. Also fine assonances.
Well done.
No nits but I do have a suggestion for your kind consideration--I think the poem would be fine without any end-line punctuation...it is easy to see where phrasing stops and starts. it would look less cluttered that way, though it is also fine to keep it.
Good luck in the contest.
warmly, rd
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing rd...I appreciate your suggestion...blessings.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Interlude' is an exceptionally well-written piece. This talented poet's descriptive ability is excellent. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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'Interlude' is an exceptionally well-written piece. This talented poet's descriptive ability is excellent. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much duchessofdrumborg, for your words...blessings.
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You're more than welcome.
Blessings to you too, the Duchess
Comment from Herb
Very nice. I thought you set the mood of this piece brilliantly. And after all, this poem is just a place for a kiss, and the most important thing in that is the mood. I think I shall give it a six, whoever you are.
Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Very nice. I thought you set the mood of this piece brilliantly. And after all, this poem is just a place for a kiss, and the most important thing in that is the mood. I think I shall give it a six, whoever you are.
Good job.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for the six stars Herb...I truly appreciate them and I am glad you enjoyed my poem...blessings.
Comment from Mariea
A very poignant piece of work. 'A lone willow tree stands tall and serene' - a lovely line that evokes quiet glades and peaceful days.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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A very poignant piece of work. 'A lone willow tree stands tall and serene' - a lovely line that evokes quiet glades and peaceful days.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much Mia, for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
