Iambic is the Treachery I Speak
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Comment from chita
You have good imagery and a good flow with your poem and rhyme well-you are descriptive and write about writing-you write about iambic being treacherous but I do believe that it is tedious--I like where you write(Until a perfect sonnet takes the day-with both a rhythm and wile to air)and even to the write of a sonnet you find deceit--great job.
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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You have good imagery and a good flow with your poem and rhyme well-you are descriptive and write about writing-you write about iambic being treacherous but I do believe that it is tedious--I like where you write(Until a perfect sonnet takes the day-with both a rhythm and wile to air)and even to the write of a sonnet you find deceit--great job.
Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Thank you, Chita. Indeed, form is sometimes worshiped to the exclusion of content, which is just absurd.
Mike
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
i did enjoy this read very much, in fact i think it is worth reading several times, i admire both your discipline and your message!!
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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i did enjoy this read very much, in fact i think it is worth reading several times, i admire both your discipline and your message!!
Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Thank you, Knight :-). I adore writing about writing itself - there's probably only a very niche market for such subjects, but it's an ideal way to hone one's quill.
Mike
Comment from jadapenn
You're talking to an Iambic retard, friend. lol. This flowed well and I love 'For meter's only King if art is Queen'. Ugh, I think I'll give up on this meter stuff. Too high fluting. This concept was original and interesting though. Well done. luv jada
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reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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You're talking to an Iambic retard, friend. lol. This flowed well and I love 'For meter's only King if art is Queen'. Ugh, I think I'll give up on this meter stuff. Too high fluting. This concept was original and interesting though. Well done. luv jada
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Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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lol, thanks Jada. I'm fond of ridiculing form (even if I still use it!). I couldn't do it either a couple of years ago, but then it just 'clicked' and now it's difficult to write without meter ...
Mike
Comment from Emeryald
Yes I did like this, you are very wordy it's great, delicious!
Im not sure about ..'sighs unto' I kept re reading that part, but I really liked it, thankyou for this gem x
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Yes I did like this, you are very wordy it's great, delicious!
Im not sure about ..'sighs unto' I kept re reading that part, but I really liked it, thankyou for this gem x
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Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the read :-)
Mike