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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Harley's Ampeletum"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from judy corcoran
this is so lovely patty
i'm so glad i came across it
just love
'Oh the joy puppies bring
with their little faces
puppy barks, nips and fun
running puppy races'
i can't have a dog where i live, and it wouldn't be fair anyway as i'm at work all week.... and i believe that animals should have us around more than i'd be able...
but i do miss having an animal friend - you are so lucky
i really like the rhythm of this form
might try it myself
love judy
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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this is so lovely patty
i'm so glad i came across it
just love
'Oh the joy puppies bring
with their little faces
puppy barks, nips and fun
running puppy races'
i can't have a dog where i live, and it wouldn't be fair anyway as i'm at work all week.... and i believe that animals should have us around more than i'd be able...
but i do miss having an animal friend - you are so lucky
i really like the rhythm of this form
might try it myself
love judy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from Dave Sargeant
I don't seem to come to terms with syllables but have had dogs and other assorted animals/pets. I love your poem as it catches an aspect of the life of a pup, even the scratches/nibbles on the hand. Dave.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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I don't seem to come to terms with syllables but have had dogs and other assorted animals/pets. I love your poem as it catches an aspect of the life of a pup, even the scratches/nibbles on the hand. Dave.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from ImJLAD
Very much enjoyed! Even brought a nice smile to my face.
"little teeth leave their mark" This one in particular really made me grin - my cat leaves the same remarks when i am not giving him enough attention :)
Great poem, perfectly written for the ampeletum!
Pets are so much fun...and SOOOO cute!
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Very much enjoyed! Even brought a nice smile to my face.
"little teeth leave their mark" This one in particular really made me grin - my cat leaves the same remarks when i am not giving him enough attention :)
Great poem, perfectly written for the ampeletum!
Pets are so much fun...and SOOOO cute!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from CodyJack
I enjoyed this poem about your puppy, Harley. I like that name for dogs. I also love that playing stage they go throught. Mine, Fancy, is going through and she is so cute. Great imagery and emotions you write with. Great job. Your friend, Cody
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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I enjoyed this poem about your puppy, Harley. I like that name for dogs. I also love that playing stage they go throught. Mine, Fancy, is going through and she is so cute. Great imagery and emotions you write with. Great job. Your friend, Cody
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from Janeyjane
I very much enjoyed reading this poem, it has a good meter all the way through. The words you use are perfect for this poem . Thanks for sharing , it was a very enjoyable read !
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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I very much enjoyed reading this poem, it has a good meter all the way through. The words you use are perfect for this poem . Thanks for sharing , it was a very enjoyable read !
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from marcellawachtel
Congratulations on your success in the utilization of the complex form of poetry you have chosen for this work. It seems to work for you, because you have written a lovely poem!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Congratulations on your success in the utilization of the complex form of poetry you have chosen for this work. It seems to work for you, because you have written a lovely poem!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
Comment from boberto
Hi, Patty:
I'm happy you are putting together a bo0ok on your pets.
Harley a cute little guy. Although we have two dogs that we saved, I'm really not a dog person. I love kittens. We have saved 14 of them. All pets get the works--I'm pet poor. Keep it up---they return more than they receive.
boberto
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Hi, Patty:
I'm happy you are putting together a bo0ok on your pets.
Harley a cute little guy. Although we have two dogs that we saved, I'm really not a dog person. I love kittens. We have saved 14 of them. All pets get the works--I'm pet poor. Keep it up---they return more than they receive.
boberto
Comment Written 21-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing the latest pet poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it - Harley wiggles his littel tail in salute! ~patty~
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Tell him I barked a "welcome."
boberto
Comment from moyramouse
I must confess to thinking ampeletum was describing Harley's tummy until I read some of the other ratings!!! Now I know what an ampeletum is and gosh it sure does put some pressure on you to produce. I think you've done a good job.
Harley looks absolutely adorable - I have a Norfolk Terrier who is just a year old and he is such a character. We also have a golden labrador who is getting on in years but the youngster has given him a new lease of life. x moyramouse
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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I must confess to thinking ampeletum was describing Harley's tummy until I read some of the other ratings!!! Now I know what an ampeletum is and gosh it sure does put some pressure on you to produce. I think you've done a good job.
Harley looks absolutely adorable - I have a Norfolk Terrier who is just a year old and he is such a character. We also have a golden labrador who is getting on in years but the youngster has given him a new lease of life. x moyramouse
Comment Written 21-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading my latest pet poem. Harley is indeed a character and lives up to everything I read about the breed before he came to live with me. ~patty~
Comment from Kingsland
I can tell that you are a lover of small animals. I am also. This was just a very delightful piece of poetic art that put a smile upon my face... John
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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I can tell that you are a lover of small animals. I am also. This was just a very delightful piece of poetic art that put a smile upon my face... John
Comment Written 21-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my latest pet poem. Harley is an incredible companion and a wonderful muse. ~patty~
Comment from jmdg1954
Well written ampeltum... tough constrictions for this type of poem but you pulled it off.
Love the photo of the puppy..
Nicely done, John
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Well written ampeltum... tough constrictions for this type of poem but you pulled it off.
Love the photo of the puppy..
Nicely done, John
Comment Written 21-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading the latest of my pet poems. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~