High Speed, High Impact Part 4
The fourth in a series13 total reviews
Comment from richard7
First, well written clear and spacious it takes it's time and is not a rushed out jumbled story.
It is a grabbing continuation of your story Debbie.
I am glad for the last verse that shows a definite positive approach to each empathic day.
Nice to hear the birdsong without forcing yourself too eh.
Hope you have a fun New year evening till next year!
Best wishes
Richard.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010
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First, well written clear and spacious it takes it's time and is not a rushed out jumbled story.
It is a grabbing continuation of your story Debbie.
I am glad for the last verse that shows a definite positive approach to each empathic day.
Nice to hear the birdsong without forcing yourself too eh.
Hope you have a fun New year evening till next year!
Best wishes
Richard.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010
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Hi Richard7. Thanks for the wonderful review and enjoy the New Year!!!
Comment from The Stranger
it is indeed a mystery as to why we accept god at the more traumatic times of our lives, you became more aware following a rather serious accident, whilst in my case it was finding I had Parkinsons disease
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it is indeed a mystery as to why we accept god at the more traumatic times of our lives, you became more aware following a rather serious accident, whilst in my case it was finding I had Parkinsons disease
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Comment Written 31-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review and comments.Debbie
Comment from adewpearl
typo - I still I still only get
Everyday is a new day - Every day - as one word "everyday" is an adjective, like everyday clothes
You explain the consequences of becoming disabled clearly and with passion. One who has not undergone a similar experience can only try to imagine how much this has impacted your life in so many ways. Your attitude is remarkable, and I love that you end on the high note of how this has improved your outlook while not sugarcoating things to make it sound like the negatives have not been a big deal. BRooke :-)
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typo - I still I still only get
Everyday is a new day - Every day - as one word "everyday" is an adjective, like everyday clothes
You explain the consequences of becoming disabled clearly and with passion. One who has not undergone a similar experience can only try to imagine how much this has impacted your life in so many ways. Your attitude is remarkable, and I love that you end on the high note of how this has improved your outlook while not sugarcoating things to make it sound like the negatives have not been a big deal. BRooke :-)
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Comment Written 31-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010
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Thank so much for the kind review and for catching my typos!!!!!
Thanks also for the kind and encouraging words. Debbie