Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Golden Treasure"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from lola29
Your poem is fille with hope and inspiration, and after reading it, I must admit that I feel a lot better. Thank you for reminding us what is all about.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Your poem is fille with hope and inspiration, and after reading it, I must admit that I feel a lot better. Thank you for reminding us what is all about.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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I'm so happy to hear my poem made you feel better and lifted your spirit. Lovely review I received from you dear Lola.
Comment from Cedar
This is a beautiful spirtual poem. Your rhyming is very well done. I think your Golden Treasure is what we all
long for. Inner peace and to live in eternal peace in
a place that our Creator prepared for us.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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This is a beautiful spirtual poem. Your rhyming is very well done. I think your Golden Treasure is what we all
long for. Inner peace and to live in eternal peace in
a place that our Creator prepared for us.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful review on my poem, for I'm greatly honoured.
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Thank you for your wonderful review on my poem, for I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from sweetsilversong
A beautiful poem, one I enjoyed immensely.
The lines flowed with ease and the message loud and clear.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes.
SSS
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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A beautiful poem, one I enjoyed immensely.
The lines flowed with ease and the message loud and clear.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes.
SSS
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your beautiful words about my poem, for I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from lisasolorio1
You have a very nice poeticness about you. ( I hope that is a real word! Sounds nice though ) And your poem makes you take a little step back and think about faith and what if... Happy Holidays.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2010
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You have a very nice poeticness about you. ( I hope that is a real word! Sounds nice though ) And your poem makes you take a little step back and think about faith and what if... Happy Holidays.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful review. The word "poeticness" is fascinating and I would like to hear more about it. Wei kindness, Sarah
Comment from Adama
The Golden Treasure is a beautiful poem of spirit and loves which highlights, for me, the importance of understanding that 'wherever we go, we leave a trend,
that follows us to the very end! Lovely.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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The Golden Treasure is a beautiful poem of spirit and loves which highlights, for me, the importance of understanding that 'wherever we go, we leave a trend,
that follows us to the very end! Lovely.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you Adama for your wonderful review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'The Golden Treasure' is a delightfully written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's message should serve as a lesson to the rest of us. It was a privilege to read and review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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'The Golden Treasure' is a delightfully written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's message should serve as a lesson to the rest of us. It was a privilege to read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your great and wonderful review, I a'm greatly honoured. With a warm greeting Sarah
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Sarah, you're more than welcome. You have talent so KEEP WRITING!
With my best wishes,
the Duchess
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Thank you Duchess for encouraging me to continue my writing, it is very helpful in every way. I think your review of my poem is very precious and I love to write more poetry and evan stories but usually when I write comes to me like a gust of wind and I have to be quick to write it down. Have a question? What does "fleshtone" mean?
With warm greetings to you,
Sarah
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Sarah, you're more than welcome. Keep writng poetry as you have the feel for it. "Fleshtone" means the colour of human skin.
With my best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from rosah
so very beautiful, and true, the beauty, truth, and joy, that dwell within each of us, is always greater than anything, thank you for sharing this lovely poem, blessings.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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so very beautiful, and true, the beauty, truth, and joy, that dwell within each of us, is always greater than anything, thank you for sharing this lovely poem, blessings.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your beautiful words about my poem, for I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a well-written poem arranged in the traditional format. The rhymes are just fine and the message is clear and rings very true. kudos
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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This is a well-written poem arranged in the traditional format. The rhymes are just fine and the message is clear and rings very true. kudos
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful review on my poem, I greatly appreciate them.
Comment from heyjude
sara, I like the message of overcoming sin and remembering
God in your life. He is greater and lives within us.
Sometimes we fear sin will overcome us, but with His help
we will overcome.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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sara, I like the message of overcoming sin and remembering
God in your life. He is greater and lives within us.
Sometimes we fear sin will overcome us, but with His help
we will overcome.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your meaningful review, I really appreciate it.
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Thank you for your meaningful review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from bobwhite
I like this poem of truth. It flows so easily and is full of wisdom. The last lines Greater is He that dwells in you,the King of glory is the secret to being able to resist temptation.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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I like this poem of truth. It flows so easily and is full of wisdom. The last lines Greater is He that dwells in you,the King of glory is the secret to being able to resist temptation.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your meaningful review, I really appreciate it.