Where Tranquility Lingers
Inspired by Judian James's -The Meadow13 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
Nice work, Helvi. This has beautiful flow
and meter which matches the thoughts expressed.
Your rhyme is meaningful andthe imagery beautiful.
Reading this one experiences peace. A well crafted
poem deserving of the six.
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Nice work, Helvi. This has beautiful flow
and meter which matches the thoughts expressed.
Your rhyme is meaningful andthe imagery beautiful.
Reading this one experiences peace. A well crafted
poem deserving of the six.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2010
Comment from NadiaScrieva
What a beautiful poem, and an interesting story of how you found your inspiration! It's good that you caught it and didn't let it fly away.
I would have liked if that line were the last one, the way you wrote it in your author's note, and after you had described the beautiful place.
Well done!
Nadia
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What a beautiful poem, and an interesting story of how you found your inspiration! It's good that you caught it and didn't let it fly away.
I would have liked if that line were the last one, the way you wrote it in your author's note, and after you had described the beautiful place.
Well done!
Nadia
Comment Written 27-Jun-2010
Comment from marion
Hi there Helvi - well you have captured that line perfectly. Judian James poetry is always inspiring. Well presented, with lots of emotion, I can feel that place. Marion.
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2010
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Hi there Helvi - well you have captured that line perfectly. Judian James poetry is always inspiring. Well presented, with lots of emotion, I can feel that place. Marion.
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2010
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I agree with you 100% regarding Judian. I enjoy her poetry very much. I'm so glad my words reached out to you in some way. If you could feel my poem, then I left you with a little tranquilty and that's a marvelous feeling. Thank you for the wonderful review. Helvi :o)