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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I agree whole-heartedly -
love conquers all - when I
had the base of my spine cut
off (the coccyx) it was 11
months before I could walk
unaided and felt any relief
from the contstand pain in my
spine that caused other complication
in the bowel - Colin worked from
home, and rallied round me, giving
me the courage and encouragement
to keep trying. Thank the Lord, we
won in the end, altho I've still
complications.
A great write, Carol.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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I agree whole-heartedly -
love conquers all - when I
had the base of my spine cut
off (the coccyx) it was 11
months before I could walk
unaided and felt any relief
from the contstand pain in my
spine that caused other complication
in the bowel - Colin worked from
home, and rallied round me, giving
me the courage and encouragement
to keep trying. Thank the Lord, we
won in the end, altho I've still
complications.
A great write, Carol.
Margaret.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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Oh, so sorry to hear that - I can always listen if you need to talk, my friend. M x
Comment from melyuki
now this short story tells it all. love is stronger in its healing powers than any form of medicine can or will ever be. never underestimate the power of love... and the power of the mind , when swept by this love, heal itself.. a brilliant effort in such a few short lines... thanks for sharing this amazing gift of healing... xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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now this short story tells it all. love is stronger in its healing powers than any form of medicine can or will ever be. never underestimate the power of love... and the power of the mind , when swept by this love, heal itself.. a brilliant effort in such a few short lines... thanks for sharing this amazing gift of healing... xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sis...Smiles to you...Sis
Comment from Frances Jean
Lovely little story and cleverly written without the use of an 's'. It's not easy as this letter is used at the beginning of more words in the English language than any other. Good luck Frances
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Lovely little story and cleverly written without the use of an 's'. It's not easy as this letter is used at the beginning of more words in the English language than any other. Good luck Frances
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, good storyline and a wonderful picture. i enjoyed reading the story and ended with a smile on my face. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, good storyline and a wonderful picture. i enjoyed reading the story and ended with a smile on my face. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Helen Tan
I enjoyed this story, it was concise and complete. I guess it must be a surgeon speaking to the lady with the broken heart.
My only suggestion is to put in a word count. The "s" condition is certainly well met.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed this story, it was concise and complete. I guess it must be a surgeon speaking to the lady with the broken heart.
My only suggestion is to put in a word count. The "s" condition is certainly well met.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Rafaqat Bano
hi
said a lot...in a few lines ...as have been said spontaneously .......flow in lines....it is right exactly that sometimes only love heals the wounded heart .given beautiful picture has enhanced the beauty of written words .... ..well done in few words.thanks for sharing .
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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hi
said a lot...in a few lines ...as have been said spontaneously .......flow in lines....it is right exactly that sometimes only love heals the wounded heart .given beautiful picture has enhanced the beauty of written words .... ..well done in few words.thanks for sharing .
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a well done and dramatic little story, and with a wonderfully happy ending--and creatively done without using the letter "s." Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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This is a well done and dramatic little story, and with a wonderfully happy ending--and creatively done without using the letter "s." Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from dportwood
Author,
Great imagery from a life-is-not-worth-living attitude to a very happy ending. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Duane
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Author,
Great imagery from a life-is-not-worth-living attitude to a very happy ending. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Duane
Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from jmdg1954
Well done. The rules said no author notes except contest rules... I read the poem without regard to the author notes so would never penalize a writer for that. The flow was well done in your verse...
Good luck with the contest... John
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Well done. The rules said no author notes except contest rules... I read the poem without regard to the author notes so would never penalize a writer for that. The flow was well done in your verse...
Good luck with the contest... John
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Soledadpaz
I wondered how you could write anything without the letter S. It seemed impossible but yet you did it and you did it with style. Great work!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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I wondered how you could write anything without the letter S. It seemed impossible but yet you did it and you did it with style. Great work!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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Carol,
My sympathies. I know life can be cruel sometimes. I will think good thoughts for you.
Take care,
Sole
