Contest Entry and Winners
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I'm Here!"Short Stories
60 total reviews
Comment from Alaskastory
'I'm Here' is inspiring for the faith it eludes. A lot of story is told in so few words.
The writing is beautiful and deserving to be a top winner.
Congratulations!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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'I'm Here' is inspiring for the faith it eludes. A lot of story is told in so few words.
The writing is beautiful and deserving to be a top winner.
Congratulations!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Alaska,
Thank you so much for the kind comments and wishes. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
I really liked this.
It was powerful.
Moving.
Interesting.
Good descriptions.
Nice image.
I liked the ending.
Good luck in the contest.
Kathryn
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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I really liked this.
It was powerful.
Moving.
Interesting.
Good descriptions.
Nice image.
I liked the ending.
Good luck in the contest.
Kathryn
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Kathryn
Thank you so much for the kind response. I really appreciate it. Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome Carol.
Kathryn
Comment from Oatmeal
Excellent tale. I wish you the best in the contest. The story line flowed well. The theme was nice.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Excellent tale. I wish you the best in the contest. The story line flowed well. The theme was nice.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Oatmeal,
Thank you so much for the kind comments. I truly appreciate it. Smiles Carol
Comment from chaswriter
blind poet - I have a feeling this story is going to win. It has the pathos, the touching situation, a forlorn mother and a hint of faith. Nicely done.
Charlie
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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blind poet - I have a feeling this story is going to win. It has the pathos, the touching situation, a forlorn mother and a hint of faith. Nicely done.
Charlie
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Charlie,
Thank you so much for having confidence in my story. I appreciate all the good thoughts. Carol
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Carol - Congratulations. I thought you had a winner.
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
The contest rules of 100 words demanded a story with more communication in less words and you have done it successfully. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
best wishes in the contest
K
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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The contest rules of 100 words demanded a story with more communication in less words and you have done it successfully. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
best wishes in the contest
K
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Kashif
thanks for reading and enjoying the story.
smiles, Carol
Comment from wierdgrace
I have done this same thing at my sisters grave, how emotional, and how well written with the character, your son, and the sadness is shown well in the words you use, good luck in the contest.,
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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I have done this same thing at my sisters grave, how emotional, and how well written with the character, your son, and the sadness is shown well in the words you use, good luck in the contest.,
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Wierdgrace,
I believe it is a special pleasing from above...we are so lucky to receive. Thank you...Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi,
This is such a touching story. I have knelt beside my husband's grave and talked to him like the woman in your story. Somehow it is very comforting and he has given me more than one sign that he hears me. Well done and good luck in the contest. Blessings....chey
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Hi,
This is such a touching story. I have knelt beside my husband's grave and talked to him like the woman in your story. Somehow it is very comforting and he has given me more than one sign that he hears me. Well done and good luck in the contest. Blessings....chey
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Chey,
Me too! I feel so blessed when it happens..Seems like it gives me strength to go on again. Thanks--Carol
Comment from c_lucas
"Can't" is a word you cannot find in a strong person's dictionary. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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"Can't" is a word you cannot find in a strong person's dictionary. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Charlie
My father etched that upon my mind and soul many many times...Thanks - Carol
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You're welcome, Carol. Charlie
Comment from AlvinTEthington
Yes, sometimes when we are at our lowest, we receive that spark of divine inspiration and hope that allows us to continue on. Good celestial and terrestrial descriptions. Excellent juxtaposition of picture and story.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Yes, sometimes when we are at our lowest, we receive that spark of divine inspiration and hope that allows us to continue on. Good celestial and terrestrial descriptions. Excellent juxtaposition of picture and story.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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Alvin
Our blessing come in many different ways as long as we are open to accepting them. Smiles, Carol
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Very true.
Comment from vandawalker
What inspirational writing! It's almost poetic. It's amazing that such a short story can have such an impacting theme. Good work.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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What inspirational writing! It's almost poetic. It's amazing that such a short story can have such an impacting theme. Good work.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
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vandawalker
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I truly appreciate them. Smiles, Carol