Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

I don't know how I missed reviewing this one
and I'm glad I caught it tonight. I love these
triolets - they do seem very musical - and
definitely fit your words or vice versa - Nice
thoughts conveyed here. Great picture too.!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, Nancy - I appreciate your positive and encouraging comments :-) Brooke

Comment from Laidy

Excellent

i loved reading this poem because i love the winter and the holidays. this was a fun poem to read and found it was expressed well.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, Laidy, for this thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from perunest

Excellent

A lovely song of joy and peace to
help celebrate this wonderful season.
I enjoy your continued gifts of this
format and look forward to your every
creation! Carolyn

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you, my friend for this gracious review :-) Brooke

Comment from Phil Kitom

Excellent

An excellent poem in preparation for the season
of the year when people appear to find he truth
in their hearts and most are able to share this
with others. Excellent artwork too Brooke...

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, Dave, for a thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

I think carols make Christmas give it that atmosphere needed so many forget the true meaning of Christmas well done on this piece regards Fuller

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thanks so much, Fuller - so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

Comment from fionageorge

Excellent

Well, another beautiful and timely poem about peace on earth, as the Christmas season comes close. The artwork is lovely, but your words stand on their own, as a beautiful message, great rhythm and rhyme, and easy to read.
Warmest regards
Marijke

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you, Marijke. I'm so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

Comment from Mark Nolan

Excellent

Hi adewpearl, I figure this is hard stuff to write. However, you did a great job as it flows freely and it is a good read. well done.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you, Mark. I appreciate your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from NightWriter

Excellent

"As Carols Sing of Peace on Earth" is a beautifully written and stated triolet. The rhythm and rhyming is perfect from beginning to end. Bravo!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you, my friend - so glad you enjoyed. Now, since you like my poetry, you can put in a good word with Stan about me! :-) Brooke

reply by NightWriter on 01-Dec-2009

LOL! I can tell you Stan, being around as long has he has, has a true appreciation for the Arts, and poetry!

Comment from peggysis64

Excellent

Brooke,

Another very well written piece. No corrections needed, very visual and easy to read.

"As carols sing of peace on Earth
I send my wishes Heavenwards"

Would be nice if " we might realize the worth
found in these pure and Holy words"

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you so much, peggysis :-) I appreciate your gracious comments. Brooke

Comment from flygirl254

Excellent

This is a very good triolet poem. You've hit your syllable counts spot on, and I like the specific lines you've chosen to be the ones for repetition. They really emphasize the message you are trying to convey. You have a really good rhyme scheme that somehow seems to focus the reader on the birth of Christ and its worth. I would think you could have done well with this poem in the holiday contest. In any case, you've done well with this poem in general and deserve a congratulations on a good work.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you, flygirl - the repeating lines are always the key to the triolet, so I'm glad you think they work :-) I have a different poem in the contest :-) Brooke