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dportwood
Horrible, horrible treatment by those who ignore the truth about a situation. Your story clearly explains this situation and contains strength in its narrative.
Duane
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
Thank you for your kind review. This portion of the book is primarily narrative. I usually have more dialoge but chose to present the infomation this way.