Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Detour Or Destiny?"18 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
HI Sweetheart. Interesting pondering. I think the first few stanzas are a bit vague for the general reader, though I like them a lot and do not suggest changes. The flow is good too. I especially loved the closing
Recycled decisions
The constant circle
Finally brings revelation
To change what was
To obtain
what we never had
Nice to read your philosophical meanderings.
Love you...and I am back on line now!
Hugs,
rd
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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HI Sweetheart. Interesting pondering. I think the first few stanzas are a bit vague for the general reader, though I like them a lot and do not suggest changes. The flow is good too. I especially loved the closing
Recycled decisions
The constant circle
Finally brings revelation
To change what was
To obtain
what we never had
Nice to read your philosophical meanderings.
Love you...and I am back on line now!
Hugs,
rd
Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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I will consider the first few lines. Let me know if you have suggestions. I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU BACK! Missed you!
Comment from RaymondJohn
I'm sure you've heard the old expression "You can't miss what you've never had." That might be the title for this. Sedate use of language and very insightful. Well done. Ray.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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I'm sure you've heard the old expression "You can't miss what you've never had." That might be the title for this. Sedate use of language and very insightful. Well done. Ray.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thanks Ray! I like that suggestion but it would be cliche' no?
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Yes. It wasn't an actual title suggestion, just a way to summarize the theme. Ray.
Comment from Nanny 6
The past is behind us, yet we constantly take the detour instead of going forth and learning the lesson sooner. Your word speak volumes, Jewell. Great piece of work. Judy
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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The past is behind us, yet we constantly take the detour instead of going forth and learning the lesson sooner. Your word speak volumes, Jewell. Great piece of work. Judy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you for this Judy! Glad this spoke to you.
Comment from aviddbrut
great job jewell. how many of us never learn this lesson? we see where we have been but we continue to repeat the same old patterns and make the same choices. to get a different outcome we must make different choices. we can create a new fate. you state this so well. I love the free verse. well done.
david
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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great job jewell. how many of us never learn this lesson? we see where we have been but we continue to repeat the same old patterns and make the same choices. to get a different outcome we must make different choices. we can create a new fate. you state this so well. I love the free verse. well done.
david
Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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You know, we'll continue to have the chances to change our ways, until we finally change our ways! God is merciful that way. Right? So happy to hear from you again!
Comment from The Rivaling Mimic
Hmm the last post I read by VisionaryPoet777 it stated in her bio that she goes under...Thru_Her_Eyes if I recall correctly. Anyway, that's besides the point. Your poem match the picture perfectly. I have noticed no room for improvemnt.
The Rivaling Mimic
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Hmm the last post I read by VisionaryPoet777 it stated in her bio that she goes under...Thru_Her_Eyes if I recall correctly. Anyway, that's besides the point. Your poem match the picture perfectly. I have noticed no room for improvemnt.
The Rivaling Mimic
Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thru Her Eyes WAS the former screen name for fanart! I need to change that in my bio. Thank you for the reminder! I thought you read this with blinders on. How did you know it was mine?
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Lucky Guess hehe.
No actually I didn't know. I saw who the picture was taken by. It said VisionaryPoet777 and whaddaya know...you were the poet as well *smiles*
The Rivaling Mimic
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I like the new picture, Excellent This a wonderful poem and beautifully worded, i like how it flow a Rich and amazing imagery There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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I like the new picture, Excellent This a wonderful poem and beautifully worded, i like how it flow a Rich and amazing imagery There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one
Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thanks BnB!
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I have'nt got a review from you, remember our deal. QQ
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Now you have, sweety. Sorry I've neglected you! I unchecked my notifications in my inbox, and so sorry your work slipped through my fingers.
Comment from Diny
Love the positive attitude even when in troubled times- You are amazing but then you do know that right?- haha Write on- Hugs-di
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Love the positive attitude even when in troubled times- You are amazing but then you do know that right?- haha Write on- Hugs-di
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Hello dear one. I apreciate you stopping in! I wrote this before yesterday! Perhaps it was a message to me for what was to come. Duh! We are always warned. We just don't listen.
Comment from Kingsland
that's an excellent picture you chose to adorn your words. it has a suitableness as the poem relays as well. Your form and format work in well for this verse as well .this was just a delight to have read and reviewed it... John
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that's an excellent picture you chose to adorn your words. it has a suitableness as the poem relays as well. Your form and format work in well for this verse as well .this was just a delight to have read and reviewed it... John
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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What does the content tell you, John. This felt like a generic review. But I am very happy to hear from you!
