CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 105 "Morning Glory"A collection of poetry
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Comment from MJMuraco
Your trilonnet was beautifully written. You did a great job of making the snow pretty and peaceful. I especially loved the metaphor of the icing on the cake. I live where there is a lot of snow. I don't like the snow but I can appreciate its beauty as long as I am warm inside.
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Your trilonnet was beautifully written. You did a great job of making the snow pretty and peaceful. I especially loved the metaphor of the icing on the cake. I live where there is a lot of snow. I don't like the snow but I can appreciate its beauty as long as I am warm inside.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
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I don't like it either! HA! But, we did get this storm and I had a poem to write about nature...so there you go! HA! It was pretty, but I'd rather be in the warmth any day. Thanks very much for your great review. And for your lovely compliment! Sue
Comment from Counting Carrots
Such a beautiful poem, and in such an interesting form :) I'm afraid I'm not such a fan of the snow anymore though, as I was having a snowball fight with my friends a few weeks ago and fell over, resulting in a trip to A&E :( but it's still beautiful!
Thanks for sharing your poem :)
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Such a beautiful poem, and in such an interesting form :) I'm afraid I'm not such a fan of the snow anymore though, as I was having a snowball fight with my friends a few weeks ago and fell over, resulting in a trip to A&E :( but it's still beautiful!
Thanks for sharing your poem :)
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Comment from chaswriter
Sue - A wonderland? It makes me glad that I live in Florida. I have shoveled my driveway too many times and dinged my car too many times when I lived up north. But I have to admit that your poem presents a beautiful description after a snow storm. And I am amazed how you can write such a nice poem in a structure style as this. I wouldn't even try. Well done. Charlie
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Sue - A wonderland? It makes me glad that I live in Florida. I have shoveled my driveway too many times and dinged my car too many times when I lived up north. But I have to admit that your poem presents a beautiful description after a snow storm. And I am amazed how you can write such a nice poem in a structure style as this. I wouldn't even try. Well done. Charlie
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
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Oh, Hush Up!!! I don't want to hear from anyone about their "warm climates"!! Ha! I was born and raised in this el crappo and moved away years ago. Lived in Australia and Arizona. Now, back again for reasons that I could not help. Now, I'm jealous!!! Thanks so much for such a great review and compliments on this work! Thanks, Charlie....Sue
Comment from skye
Structured poetry is demanding, both of structure and the poet's imagination.
Your trilet captures the form, tells a good story within its lines, and is easy to read.
Beautifully crafted.
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Structured poetry is demanding, both of structure and the poet's imagination.
Your trilet captures the form, tells a good story within its lines, and is easy to read.
Beautifully crafted.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
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Thanks, Skye! Yes, it can be tricky, but I do love the challenge of a structured work. Really is a great teaching tool. Thanks very much for your great review and compliments! :-)) Sue
Comment from Roisin
What a beautiful poem. It's packed full of vivid imagery - makes me wish for snow here. It's been a few years since we've seen snow here in Ireland and your poem makes me want some. It flows really well and you've done a great job of what seems like a very difficult structure. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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What a beautiful poem. It's packed full of vivid imagery - makes me wish for snow here. It's been a few years since we've seen snow here in Ireland and your poem makes me want some. It flows really well and you've done a great job of what seems like a very difficult structure. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
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Roisin, thanks so much for your lovely compliments. Nah...you don't want snow. Nasty stuff! Ha! Stick with the green there in Eire. Thanks for the great review, also. Cheers...Sue
Comment from jack silver
this here is really great poetry writing. if their is anyone that say's different they're one hundred percent numskulls that need to learn what poetry writing is all about. it's about feelings and describing what the eyes do see. i thought your one did this and yeah your poetry writing is really superb.
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this here is really great poetry writing. if their is anyone that say's different they're one hundred percent numskulls that need to learn what poetry writing is all about. it's about feelings and describing what the eyes do see. i thought your one did this and yeah your poetry writing is really superb.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
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Hi Jack! What a wonderful review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for all your awesome compliments! Means so much. :-)) Sue
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like this poem. It describes a pleasant experience; a natural masterpiece that excited humanity, inciting children to play and produce joyous cries, and inspiring the poet to write. I enjoyed the mood of the poem. kudos
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I like this poem. It describes a pleasant experience; a natural masterpiece that excited humanity, inciting children to play and produce joyous cries, and inspiring the poet to write. I enjoyed the mood of the poem. kudos
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
Comment from justmade
The landscape sparkles ~ blinding bright
All decorated like a cake
With icing swirled and made adorn ... I see what you mean by that in the artwork. It must be really cold out there.
I think you captured this really well.
Much love,
Justmade.
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The landscape sparkles ~ blinding bright
All decorated like a cake
With icing swirled and made adorn ... I see what you mean by that in the artwork. It must be really cold out there.
I think you captured this really well.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Finally, the kind of sonnet I might be able to write -- but not for a contest, for sure. We rarely get enough snow here to even make a snowball so I'm envious of the scenes you paint so well in this trilonnet. Your imagery is wonderful and would stand on its own without the beautiful picture. good luck in the contest
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Finally, the kind of sonnet I might be able to write -- but not for a contest, for sure. We rarely get enough snow here to even make a snowball so I'm envious of the scenes you paint so well in this trilonnet. Your imagery is wonderful and would stand on its own without the beautiful picture. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
Comment from Fish
I like this poem...I'm not sure what "made adorn"
means...I thought things were "adorned"...like
heads and churches and the Pope even...he's
adorned...adored, also...
Still, a lovely poem...well-wrought with
crystally (if you'll allow me) imagery...
Yours, Fish
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I like this poem...I'm not sure what "made adorn"
means...I thought things were "adorned"...like
heads and churches and the Pope even...he's
adorned...adored, also...
Still, a lovely poem...well-wrought with
crystally (if you'll allow me) imagery...
Yours, Fish
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009