CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from cmclellan
Such nice sentiment. I can feel the emotion and love you have for your kids easily here. The poem flows well, and makes good use of language. I gave it a 4 b/c i'd like to see specific examples of how the kids embody those assets (show don;t tell kind of stuff).
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Such nice sentiment. I can feel the emotion and love you have for your kids easily here. The poem flows well, and makes good use of language. I gave it a 4 b/c i'd like to see specific examples of how the kids embody those assets (show don;t tell kind of stuff).
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2009
Comment from FredCollingwood
I am never bothered by anyone who brags about their children. (I'm one of the worst offenders.) I hold them in high esteem. Their values are in the right place. Great poem.
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I am never bothered by anyone who brags about their children. (I'm one of the worst offenders.) I hold them in high esteem. Their values are in the right place. Great poem.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from DreamChaser
Your kids sound wonderful. This poem shows your devotion and your pride. It's a beautiful piece, well written and great flow. You're lucky to have such a great family.
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Your kids sound wonderful. This poem shows your devotion and your pride. It's a beautiful piece, well written and great flow. You're lucky to have such a great family.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from Poetic Friend
I have to give to you, Sue, poetic format allows you to write the best pieces.
Another great one from your pen. I can feel the love you have for your children in this poem.
You are blessed to have such wonderful children. They are products of their environment; you raised them well.
Good job on your poem and your motherhood skills.
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I have to give to you, Sue, poetic format allows you to write the best pieces.
Another great one from your pen. I can feel the love you have for your children in this poem.
You are blessed to have such wonderful children. They are products of their environment; you raised them well.
Good job on your poem and your motherhood skills.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from mslyla216
You're quite brave to attempt to fulfill this poetry contest's requirements! You did a grand job of using your chosen of the required words. Your poem has a lovely message and the sentiment is most evident. A very good contest entry. mslyla
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You're quite brave to attempt to fulfill this poetry contest's requirements! You did a grand job of using your chosen of the required words. Your poem has a lovely message and the sentiment is most evident. A very good contest entry. mslyla
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from joan marie
The kind of family I had always dreamed of as a child. You are so blessed to have children like that. My next door neighbor has one that ran away 2 years ago not seen over there since. Another in a year long heroin rehab. One older son just gone and a younger one on the way. Tells me to f__k off. I blame the father he has not attempted that I can see to teach any respect for others. And the police are there a lot 6 times in a month! You are very blessed. joan marie
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The kind of family I had always dreamed of as a child. You are so blessed to have children like that. My next door neighbor has one that ran away 2 years ago not seen over there since. Another in a year long heroin rehab. One older son just gone and a younger one on the way. Tells me to f__k off. I blame the father he has not attempted that I can see to teach any respect for others. And the police are there a lot 6 times in a month! You are very blessed. joan marie
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from debskatz
Hey Sixteezkid,
Come on! You're not proud of your kids, are you!! lol They sound like a great bunch of kids & I'm sure they're just as happy to have you as their mom.
Thank you for sharing this happy poem with us! Too bad you couldn't have entered it in that contest also.
smiles,
deb
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Hey Sixteezkid,
Come on! You're not proud of your kids, are you!! lol They sound like a great bunch of kids & I'm sure they're just as happy to have you as their mom.
Thank you for sharing this happy poem with us! Too bad you couldn't have entered it in that contest also.
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from LadyMary
Wow, there were a lot of constraints to constructing this poetic format. For a relative newcomer, you did great! And what a lovely tribute to your children. Their attributes and giving ways are a compliment to their upbringing. Thank you for such an uplifting writing. LadyMary
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Wow, there were a lot of constraints to constructing this poetic format. For a relative newcomer, you did great! And what a lovely tribute to your children. Their attributes and giving ways are a compliment to their upbringing. Thank you for such an uplifting writing. LadyMary
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from sara-beth
Sounds like you've done a great job, your family is fantastic! What a great tribute you've written for them, I hope you share it. The fourteener contest sounded too hard to me! You've done this so well!
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Sounds like you've done a great job, your family is fantastic! What a great tribute you've written for them, I hope you share it. The fourteener contest sounded too hard to me! You've done this so well!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
Comment from Vallachi
So proud am I of all my loving children with big hearts
Their kindness to humanity; a sum of all their parts
With gentleness, they hold each other up when times get tough
Mom loves them. They're so generous. Can't brag of them enough!
what is lambic Heptameter?
I like this very much and when I read it I could just feel the love you have for your children
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So proud am I of all my loving children with big hearts
Their kindness to humanity; a sum of all their parts
With gentleness, they hold each other up when times get tough
Mom loves them. They're so generous. Can't brag of them enough!
what is lambic Heptameter?
I like this very much and when I read it I could just feel the love you have for your children
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009