Precious Gems: An Anthology
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Thirty Iron Bars"A Rhyming Collection of Treasured Works
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Comment from earthlybeing
What a sad life for such a majestic animal that belongs in the wild. People will do much for money even imprison such a creature. Well done. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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What a sad life for such a majestic animal that belongs in the wild. People will do much for money even imprison such a creature. Well done. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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Thanks so much my friend for a lovely review! xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Russel Chale
Great poem, Chris. It reverberates with emotion and has a strong affect on the reader. Good rhythm and rhyme.
At [least] captive animals are now kept in much better conditions
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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Great poem, Chris. It reverberates with emotion and has a strong affect on the reader. Good rhythm and rhyme.
At [least] captive animals are now kept in much better conditions
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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Yes, I think we're finally doing right by them after all this time. I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend. Your encouragement is always appreciated xoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment from SunlitWhisper
I'm so glad that I've found your poem it is so pure and touches the center of every heart IMHO. I remember watching the lions etc. Also when I was small but I was so in awe of them at the time that it was not until much later that I felt bad about them being in cages. Great read Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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I'm so glad that I've found your poem it is so pure and touches the center of every heart IMHO. I remember watching the lions etc. Also when I was small but I was so in awe of them at the time that it was not until much later that I felt bad about them being in cages. Great read Well done.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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Thanks so much SunlitWhisper. I'm glad you enjoyed this. It's one of those things, looking back on childhood, where one wonders what on earth these creatures did 'wrong' to be kept in cages. At least they're kept in much better conditions now. AGain, thanks so much fo ryour comments and review xoxoxoxoxxo
Comment from adewpearl
in your note - at least - you wrote at lease You have an excellent rhythm and rhyme that makes this easy to read out loud - I love the idea of a small child counting the bars as he watched the majestic tiger pace in confinement and his plea to his dad to set the animal free despite adult logic that justifies captivity
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in your note - at least - you wrote at lease You have an excellent rhythm and rhyme that makes this easy to read out loud - I love the idea of a small child counting the bars as he watched the majestic tiger pace in confinement and his plea to his dad to set the animal free despite adult logic that justifies captivity
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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Thanks so much adew for your great review and comments; they're much appreciated xoxoxoxoxxo
Comment from damevictoria
I also hate to see wild animals crowded into a small cage, that is why I very seldom go to a zoo. The poem was well written and I didn't spot any flaws.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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I also hate to see wild animals crowded into a small cage, that is why I very seldom go to a zoo. The poem was well written and I didn't spot any flaws.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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Thank you so much damevictoria (love the name!). I'm happy you enjoyed this xoxoxoxoxoxo